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Post by Thunder-blade Tue May 19, 2009 4:33 pm

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A little starfighter I made for fun...
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Post by Jedi Joe Tue May 19, 2009 4:54 pm

It's an ok MOC, I don't like the upside down plates though.
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Post by astoriabluelegos Tue May 19, 2009 6:40 pm

WOW! I'm loving the shape, and the design is brilliant as well, fantastic work here my friend! Smile Blue Arc
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue May 19, 2009 6:59 pm

Thanks guys!

Any suggestions? Cuz I think it needs some wings...
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Post by DarthPineapple Tue May 19, 2009 7:08 pm

It's a bit blocky, it needs some slopes. But I'd expect a better sharpied helmet from you. Shocked
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Post by [Jay] Tue May 19, 2009 7:08 pm

Another fine MOC TB - I love the colour scheme , but I think you should make the back longer. Smile
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Post by astoriabluelegos Tue May 19, 2009 7:12 pm

Thunder-blade wrote: I think it needs some wings...

No it doesn't, looks fine as is. Smile Blue Arc
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue May 19, 2009 8:21 pm

Ok thanks.

I'll probably make another Starfighter (MOCs in general) since school ends this week! Wow this thing looks
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Post by PhiMa Tue May 19, 2009 8:24 pm

One week?

Ah you son of a b-

*cough*

Onto the MOC. An interesting shape, but the engines need some greebles on the front. Otherwise, I think it's fine.
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Post by Rook Tue May 19, 2009 8:47 pm

Nice, I like that you're working with building in different directions, aka snot.
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Post by Superperson Tue May 19, 2009 11:15 pm

It looks awsome. I like the colors. Hola Wow!
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Post by Gerrard Wed May 20, 2009 9:23 pm

Very nice work TB! I like the plates turning outside on this a lot! I maybe would have added and longer back/tail.
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Post by moosacow Wed May 20, 2009 11:29 pm

That is cool. Is it fun to play with? I mean, it is real small! Wink
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Post by Gerrard Wed May 20, 2009 11:39 pm

Sorry, but....

That's what she said.

Oh and TB, how long did this take you?
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Post by RubbahBand Thu May 21, 2009 12:10 am

Nice one Gerrard! Laughing The design looks good and I like the colors.
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