704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
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704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
Previous Episodes
#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
#5 - Old Friends
#6 - No BDZs, but...
#7 - Through the Fire and Flames
#8 Class 8
#1 - Night Ops.
#2 - A Larger Perspective
#3 - Repercussions
#4 - Time to Die, Jedi...
#5 - Old Friends
#6 - No BDZs, but...
#7 - Through the Fire and Flames
#8 Class 8
A short comic to start my comics up again, no real exciting plot, no real exciting action, just your regular dialouge and action. Oh, and you get a plain space background until I actually motivate myself to make one.
Last edited by Alpha on Sat Jun 06, 2009 12:01 am; edited 1 time in total
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
Aha! That's what you needed the Hazmat shelter for.
A real good cliffhanger IMO, plus it really shows what kind of guy Alpha is, so really good character development.
A real good cliffhanger IMO, plus it really shows what kind of guy Alpha is, so really good character development.
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
Great special effect and even though it was short, it was well put together. Good plotline and action and it still kept me interested!
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Gerrard wrote:Great special effect and even though it was short, it was well put together. Good plotline and action and it still kept me interested!
I'm agreeing with everything but his first clause. It was splendid character development, but the effects were SERIOUSLY lacking. The sparks weren't properly placed, the blood didn't seem right, the shake seemed over-emphasized....
However, I have to give you kudos for improving your background crop !
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
Haha, yeah, I should've taken a couple loose cables and had sparks coming out.
And I guess I am a bit gory.
And I guess I am a bit gory.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
Alpha wrote:And I guess I am a bit gory.
No, I mean it doesn't seem to come out in a natural way .
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Wow nice Alpha! I love the special effects and like TB said way to much shake. Overall a pretty decent cominc.
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Character development was good! Try a little harder to show and not tell, but over-all it was nicely done. Sets could... use work? Really, they're kind of boring. While my Ingration may of been too exciting for you, all gray, and all gray studs at that, are so boring it's insane.
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Yeah, I could've thrown in some Dark Red and Light Bley, but I rushed this, and there wasn't much thought put into this, as this is just a boot up.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
I'm going to quote Sialboats, loosely, here. Never produce something your not happy with. Everything should be considered your best.
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
Wow.
2 things.
1. The blood looks like some sort of ooze. It was way too congealed.
2. Don't shake the words so much. I had to tilt the screen to read it.
Other than that, I can't wait for the next comic.
2 things.
1. The blood looks like some sort of ooze. It was way too congealed.
2. Don't shake the words so much. I had to tilt the screen to read it.
Other than that, I can't wait for the next comic.
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Wow! I like your figures. Also I love the comic.
Superperson- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : usa
Re: 704th Tactical Strike #8 - Class 8
The shaking of the words looks like poop, although everything else is awesome!
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