Exile on Felucia
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Arth Zephanas, having survived Order 66 (And personally decapitating his Clone Commander's head), has taken refugee on Felucia. 3 years later, adapting to the marsh and fauna on Felucia, Imperial Stormtroopers have discovered his location...
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Exile on Felucia
WAAAAYYY to bright. The lighting is distracting from the Moc. There is a huge glare on the Stormy's helm.
Re: Exile on Felucia
A little simple. I'd like to see you do this in a 16x16 and add some more details. Plants and ship -p +t = .
Re: Exile on Felucia
Very simple and effective. Get the lighting sorted out.
Captain Tredge- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Somewhere with star wars lego
Re: Exile on Felucia
Nice idea, I like the story behind it.
The base is (as already mentioned) a little bit bleak. No detail shows explicitly, that this is Felucia (the scarce bushes could grow nearly anywhere). Maybe some sort of giant flower or mushroom would help...
The base is (as already mentioned) a little bit bleak. No detail shows explicitly, that this is Felucia (the scarce bushes could grow nearly anywhere). Maybe some sort of giant flower or mushroom would help...
Vimes- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 39
Location : Bottrop/ Germany
Re: Exile on Felucia
If this were bigger with more plants and trees and such, it would be a lot better. But it is a good start, I like the story behind it.
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