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Exile on Felucia

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Post by Alpha Wed Jun 17, 2009 7:28 pm

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Arth Zephanas, having survived Order 66 (And personally decapitating his Clone Commander's head), has taken refugee on Felucia. 3 years later, adapting to the marsh and fauna on Felucia, Imperial Stormtroopers have discovered his location...
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Post by flare Wed Jun 17, 2009 7:39 pm

WAAAAYYY to bright. The lighting is distracting from the Moc. There is a huge glare on the Stormy's helm.
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Post by Rook Wed Jun 17, 2009 7:42 pm

A little simple. I'd like to see you do this in a 16x16 and add some more details. Plants and ship -p +t = Surprised .
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Post by Captain Tredge Wed Jun 17, 2009 8:35 pm

Very simple and effective. Get the lighting sorted out. Wink
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Post by Vimes Wed Jun 17, 2009 11:23 pm

Nice idea, I like the story behind it.
The base is (as already mentioned) a little bit bleak. No detail shows explicitly, that this is Felucia (the scarce bushes could grow nearly anywhere). Maybe some sort of giant flower or mushroom would help...
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Post by Gerrard Thu Jun 18, 2009 7:40 pm

If this were bigger with more plants and trees and such, it would be a lot better. But it is a good start, I like the story behind it.
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