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The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

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The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Zepher on Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:28 pm

For the Guild Build. A Vig. Usaing my CABG Legion, since I don't want the 313th to be in the comic and the Legion, it's too hard for me.

















Enjoy!
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by 667thLegion on Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:41 pm

Nice job! I like all the layers that are on it! My only problem is that there is a blaster overhanging on layer. Is it supposed to be that way?
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Zepher on Fri Jun 19, 2009 12:03 am

Thanks everyone! It means a lot! Thumbs up
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Comrade Faie on Fri Jun 19, 2009 12:08 am

We people who don't get commented on eventually just stop building SW and move onto different themes.

I know how you feel. Mad

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Post by Brandon9 on Fri Jun 19, 2009 12:14 am

Zepher wrote:Thanks everyone! It means a lot! Thumbs up
LOL

Anyhow, very nice Zeph the different layers are a good I idea, and I like the use og Ogel's paldren(SP) on a clone, it looks good.
I would also like to add that the plant placement really helps in the area of making the moc look like a garden area. Smile
Oh, and I almost forgot... Clones weilding saws for the win!!!!! Smile Fordo Yo!
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Alpha on Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:19 am

And that's why the aformentioned person, would fail at building, as moving onto another theme (Firstly, you should be building all themes Razz), would make you horrible at the theme you received bad comments on. Razz

But Zeph's a nice overall builder, just some issues. Wink

Now, onto the MOC, the 3 layers look excellent, my 2 complaint is that if the Clone Troopers have PII armor, shouldn't the Commander? And to me, if the Force Pike is to the gun'woman's thigh, shouldn't he be using it? Unless it's just sitting there, and he's just using his gun (Which isn't too versatile).

All in all, it's great. Smile

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Post by Gerrard on Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:34 am

Looks great Zeph! I think that you used the layers well and I like the platform coming out. Maybe try adding some tiles on there, and a little more detail. But otherwise, nicely done. Wink
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Zepher on Fri Jun 19, 2009 3:06 am

Alpha wrote:But Zeph's a nice overall builder, just some issues. Wink

Now, onto the MOC, the 3 layers look excellent, my 2 complaint is that if the Clone Troopers have PII armor, shouldn't the Commander? And to me, if the Force Pike is to the gun'woman's thigh, shouldn't he be using it? Unless it's just sitting there, and he's just using his gun (Which isn't too versatile).

All in all, it's great. Smile

Smile Thanks for the compliment!

The Commander has Phase I armor ecuase the shoulder pads don't fit with Phase II. The idea with the Force Pike is that he JUST thrust it at the woman commander.
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Sialboats on Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:15 pm

It's a solid MOC - nothing too exciting, but nothing too awful Wink - however... the character motion seems a little... artificial.
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Jens on Fri Jun 19, 2009 1:27 pm

And isn't it against the rules to make a new Legion (for the corps build)? Wink
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Zepher on Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:01 am

Shush. I'm on your team.

Fair enough Sial.
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by 80-0 on Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:24 am

Zepher wrote:
Alpha wrote:But Zeph's a nice overall builder, just some issues. Wink

Now, onto the MOC, the 3 layers look excellent, my 2 complaint is that if the Clone Troopers have PII armor, shouldn't the Commander? And to me, if the Force Pike is to the gun'woman's thigh, shouldn't he be using it? Unless it's just sitting there, and he's just using his gun (Which isn't too versatile).

All in all, it's great. Smile

Smile Thanks for the compliment!

The Commander has Phase I armor ecuase the shoulder pads don't fit with Phase II. The idea with the Force Pike is that he JUST thrust it at the woman commander.

Who's a 'he'? *stares at... characteristics on 'his' torso* Wink

I personally don't think a jungle scene works with a multilevel vignette, as jungles tend to be on the ground floor. I personally would redo it on a baseplate, 16x16 or 16x32. Smile

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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Zepher on Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:26 am

I would too, except it's for a build that has to be a vig. Wink

And it's not really a jungle, but jungles as a ground floor is not quite true. Every seen a jungle? They have many layers of trees. However, the fact that this has plant life does not make it a jungle.
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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by 80-0 on Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:31 am

Oh, confined by rules? I didn't know. Embarassed

If it's a garden it's a very poorly kept garden. Razz

They have many layers of trees, yes, but not new levels of earth and ground the higher the trees go(unless it's a plateau).

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Re: The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:06 am

It kinda looks thrown together.

Sorry, but it needs something more. It's just 3 layers of fighting and plates, nothing exciting about them.
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