The 347th's Visit to "The Garden"

For the Guild Build. A Vig. Usaing my CABG Legion, since I don't want the 313th to be in the comic and the Legion, it's too hard for me.

















Enjoy!

Nice job! I like all the layers that are on it! My only problem is that there is a blaster overhanging on layer. Is it supposed to be that way?

Thanks everyone! It means a lot!

We people who don't get commented on eventually just stop building SW and move onto different themes.

I know how you feel.

Zepher wrote:Thanks everyone! It means a lot!

LOL

Anyhow, very nice Zeph the different layers are a good I idea, and I like the use og Ogel's paldren(SP) on a clone, it looks good.
I would also like to add that the plant placement really helps in the area of making the moc look like a garden area.
Oh, and I almost forgot... Clones weilding saws for the win!!!!!

And that's why the aformentioned person, would fail at building, as moving onto another theme (Firstly, you should be building all themes ), would make you horrible at the theme you received bad comments on.

But Zeph's a nice overall builder, just some issues.

Now, onto the MOC, the 3 layers look excellent, my 2 complaint is that if the Clone Troopers have PII armor, shouldn't the Commander? And to me, if the Force Pike is to the gun'woman's thigh, shouldn't he be using it? Unless it's just sitting there, and he's just using his gun (Which isn't too versatile).

All in all, it's great.

Looks great Zeph! I think that you used the layers well and I like the platform coming out. Maybe try adding some tiles on there, and a little more detail. But otherwise, nicely done.

Alpha wrote:But Zeph's a nice overall builder, just some issues.

Now, onto the MOC, the 3 layers look excellent, my 2 complaint is that if the Clone Troopers have PII armor, shouldn't the Commander? And to me, if the Force Pike is to the gun'woman's thigh, shouldn't he be using it? Unless it's just sitting there, and he's just using his gun (Which isn't too versatile).

All in all, it's great.

Thanks for the compliment!

The Commander has Phase I armor ecuase the shoulder pads don't fit with Phase II. The idea with the Force Pike is that he JUST thrust it at the woman commander.

It's a solid MOC - nothing too exciting, but nothing too awful - however... the character motion seems a little... artificial.

And isn't it against the rules to make a new Legion (for the corps build)?

Shush. I'm on your team.

Fair enough Sial.

Zepher wrote:

Alpha wrote:But Zeph's a nice overall builder, just some issues.

Now, onto the MOC, the 3 layers look excellent, my 2 complaint is that if the Clone Troopers have PII armor, shouldn't the Commander? And to me, if the Force Pike is to the gun'woman's thigh, shouldn't he be using it? Unless it's just sitting there, and he's just using his gun (Which isn't too versatile).

All in all, it's great.

Thanks for the compliment!

The Commander has Phase I armor ecuase the shoulder pads don't fit with Phase II. The idea with the Force Pike is that he JUST thrust it at the woman commander.

Who's a 'he'? *stares at... characteristics on 'his' torso*

I personally don't think a jungle scene works with a multilevel vignette, as jungles tend to be on the ground floor. I personally would redo it on a baseplate, 16x16 or 16x32.

I would too, except it's for a build that has to be a vig.

And it's not really a jungle, but jungles as a ground floor is not quite true. Every seen a jungle? They have many layers of trees. However, the fact that this has plant life does not make it a jungle.

Oh, confined by rules? I didn't know.

If it's a garden it's a very poorly kept garden.

They have many layers of trees, yes, but not new levels of earth and ground the higher the trees go(unless it's a plateau).

It kinda looks thrown together.

Sorry, but it needs something more. It's just 3 layers of fighting and plates, nothing exciting about them.