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Post by J4ke on Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:45 pm

This is my current WIP, enjoy. Comments and suggestions are welcomed.



More pictures.

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Re: Scoutship

Post by wrecks on Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:58 pm

looks good jake, the sides are very nice. The roof is too plain, I'd suggest continuing that red strip along the top, and adding some greebles.
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Post by Gerrard on Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:37 pm

Is the red stripe not in the middle for a reason?

But looks pretty good! Adding more tiles and greebling on this would make it much more detailed and appealing. And the wing in the back needs to be longer, the mini one just doesn't look right there to me. Smile
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:44 pm

Gerrard wrote:Is the red stripe not in the middle for a reason?Smile

Uhhh...Racing stripe...duh... Wink No but not eveything has to be one color it's nice with some diversity and color adds detail too.

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Re: Scoutship

Post by Sialboats on Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:46 pm

Well, of course the roof is plain, it's a WIP.

I'd continue that red stripe down the back if you've got the plates/bricks, and then fan it out into a reverse T. Where the junction is, start a Lambaada-esque fin, and maybe add some Falcon-esque gun turrets on the sides of the fin. I think that'd look quite nice, coupled with some tasty greebles and engine panels.
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Re: Scoutship

Post by J4ke on Tue Jun 23, 2009 10:56 pm

Thanks all, some interesting ideas there. The wings aren't getting any bigger, and the stripe is staying off-centre, 'cos it's cool.

I might put a smallish fin on top, but nothing like a lambda's.

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Re: Scoutship

Post by J4ke on Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:12 pm



http://www.thecabg.net/clone-army-creations-f4/scoutship-t3936.htm#127503

Finished. If a staff member would be so good as to lock...

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