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Siege on AlphA Outpost

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Siege on AlphA Outpost

Post by PhiMa on Wed Jun 24, 2009 2:13 pm

The 251st are finally hot on the heels of AlphA and believe to have found an underground outpost! Klypto Par and a squad of jungle troopers have been sent to find and capture AlphA members. At the same time, CIS have hired bounty hunter Viktra Zen (Sister of Nyo Zen) to also capture AlphA members. They've been tunneling under the outpost with special Battledroids.

Overview:


Top shot:


Shot of the Hallway in the Outpost with an AlphA member:


The tunnel underground with the CIS:


The figs (I found some tan Cargo pants Wow this thing looks ):



And maybe a look at the gallery?

Thanks to Alpha for letting me use the AlphA member and Vimes for the name 'Zen'

C&C and comments are appreciated.
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Re: Siege on AlphA Outpost

Post by 667thLegion on Wed Jun 24, 2009 2:55 pm

I like it, and the story is good, but maybe add more clones to the top layer. Wink
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Re: Siege on AlphA Outpost

Post by Alpha on Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:10 pm

Nice.

Though the bottom 2 layers are kinda missing something, maybe it's the lack of detail, you might wanna use some tiles on the second floor, then some rocks on the first. Wink

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Re: Siege on AlphA Outpost

Post by Gerrard on Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:32 pm

More details and greebling would be great here. Though I love how you did the three layers. The plants on the top are nice but on the the bottom two maybe add some crates and a little more detail. Otherwise, I think that it looks really nice!
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Re: Siege on AlphA Outpost

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Jun 24, 2009 3:39 pm

Very nice PhiMa, I like the Jedi combination.
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Re: Siege on AlphA Outpost

Post by Jens on Wed Jun 24, 2009 5:26 pm

The CIS BH looks too AlphA.
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