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PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Sun Apr 06, 2008 3:24 am

PCW= POST CLONE WARS

The Clone Wars are over, the Jedi have been slaughtered, and now it's time for every clone to move on with their lives, one specific trooper, has become a Scout Trooper and has been deployed to the green skied world of Aeten II. The Empire needs to secure the planet for its vast resource deposits, The Rebels, also striving for resources have come to try and hold off the Imperials and capture the planet.


The Scout Trooper, (Who will be nameless...for now) Is riding on a LATT (Low Altitude Troop Transport) The transport is taking 3 new recruits to the Empire's HQ.




As the LATT approaches, The trooper notices something...familiar. The makeshift HQ is in the remains of a Republic SPHA-T.


The troops are dropped off, along with some cargo, the Field Commander walks out to meet his new troops.
"I am Field Commander Altumus. Welcome to your worst nightmare, Our spies have received intel that the Rebel's are scouting the nearby area, I want you to go destroy them before they can report back to their stronghold. But first, I need to check on your equipment and comlink devices."



Altumus calls the Scout Trooper over, "Trooper, you are one of the most valuable members of the troops here, it's your job to kill as many rebels without them reporting that you exist, you are to be a ghost, they will fear you, they will never see you, move out, Ghost.

As the trooper leaves, Altumus thinks to himself, "Why would a scout trooper be carrying a Star-Corps pistol? I thought they gave them all standard weaponry.." But he shook off the thought and moved on.

The trooper is hidden behind a rock formation, 3 other stormtroopers are out in the front, the rebel speeder is zooming by, the Rebel's haven't seen the stormtroopers...yet.


The speeder roars over a demolished pile of shrapnel


The Shock Trooper launches a concussion blast at the speeder, it flips onto its side and the gun turret explodes.


A Rebel runs around back to check on the health of the gunner, leaving himself open to a quick and easy headshot.


Another rebel aims at the Shock Trooper. The Scout Trooper shoots him in the head, he dies.


The shock trooper blasts a concussion rocket at a rebel, he flies backwards.


The troopers wait for a few minutes, checking to make sure there aren't any signs of life, the rebel gunner struggles onto the rolled over speeder


A quick and easy headshot instantly kills him.


The troopers return, victorious and busting with pride, they are praised and each placed at the head of a division.


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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:13 am

I really like the story! But the planet itself.. and the MOCs could be done a little better.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:26 am

I designed it to be in a very run down and beaten environment, I build everything moderately bad on purpose, it was meant to look like that.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Comrade Faie on Sun Apr 06, 2008 2:13 pm

GREAT storyline I love this MOC great use of all those gray pieces. Fordo Yo!

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Post by astoriabluelegos on Sun Apr 06, 2008 4:57 pm

WOW cool storyline and MOC, VERY well done Uberlag! Hola Wow! Blue Arc
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:03 pm

Smile Thanks guys, theres probably going to more, this is a comic-series, sit tight!
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:55 pm

I like the overall plot and how you did this, but it seems just a little bland; like it's missing something.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:01 pm

These are Clones, right? Because a couple stormies couldn't do anything to a rebel tank! Razz

But yea, I loved the mocs and the story. Keep up the good work!


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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Sun Apr 06, 2008 9:14 pm

Stormies, this is POST-CLONE WARS
And a concussion rocket could do something like that.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Wookieedude1 on Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:24 pm

And clones are stormies, so does it matter?
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:51 pm

Not all stormies are clones,the empire took volunteers after awhile.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by at-57 on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:17 pm

Uberlag wrote:Not all stormies are clones,the empire took volunteers after awhile.
Yep they also took "volunteers" if you know what I mean.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:27 pm

at-57 wrote:
Uberlag wrote:Not all stormies are clones,the empire took volunteers after awhile.
Yep they also took "volunteers" if you know what I mean.
I just said they take volunteers, learn to read?
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Post by Aridar on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:29 pm

I think he meant that they weren't really Volunteers, they were forced into service.
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Post by Zepher on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:30 pm

I think that he was refering to the fact that they were probaly forced to join and that they didn't really "volunteer".
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:31 pm

Not quite, from what I heard, you could choose to join.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Comrade Faie on Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:01 am

Hey, could anyone possibly join in the comic if we give you a sig fig? Fordo Yo!


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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:04 am

You want a renegade clone character, civvie, bounty hunter, stormie, just tell me what you want and I will see if it works.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by at-57 on Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:18 am

Uberlag wrote:Not quite, from what I heard, you could choose to join.
I have read some of the star wars books and comics if they want you to join you have to or you die. Now with that being said you could join if you wanted.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by maggosh on Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:11 pm

Nice green screen. I'll expect some good shots from that.
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Post by astoriabluelegos on Thu Apr 10, 2008 8:26 pm

Uberlag wrote:Not quite, from what I heard, you could choose to join.

Their were several ways to join the Imperial army, get drafted, get forced, join up freely, get cloned etc... And on top of these there were clones of Fett still in service and being produced, but after the second battle of Kamino, clones from elite human soldiers began to join the ranks. Smile Blue Arc
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Post by Jedi Joe on Thu Apr 10, 2008 8:29 pm

What I meant is:

Are these recruits, or are they clones of Jango Fett? Because the recruits were crap.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by Uberlag on Thu Apr 10, 2008 11:51 pm

Jango clones, cuz they are awesome.
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial

Post by astoriabluelegos on Fri Apr 11, 2008 5:39 am

Jedi Joe wrote:What I meant is:

Are these recruits, or are they clones of Jango Fett? Because the recruits were crap.

Like I said they were both, Jango clones, human recruits, ad other new clones of new elite human Imperial soldiers. Smile Blue Arc
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