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Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

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Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Zepher on Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:27 pm

I am very happy with this episode! My GIMPing is nice, and I finally really think that everything works, and I got everything I wanted to into the episode without making it feel strained!

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Episode 12
The Battle of Nekt: Prey


Recap"
Versilles, Lofsurra, Boom, and Cell were all on Nekt evacing refugee's when they were stranded by a Dark Jedi. He proved to be too much for the Jedi to handle, so they fled and broke down a cliff to evade their attacker.















































Hope you enjoyed! And please, please, please, comment! I work really hard on these, and usually only get about 5 people commenting! Be it negative or postive, I ust want to hear that you read it!

-Zepher
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Commando Shade on Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:31 pm

The storyline and the GIMPing was good, but some of the speech bubbles are cut off.

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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by PhiMa on Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:35 pm

Not bad, the gimping was done well, but maybe pick a different background for sky next time. I liked how there was a flash of light when Lofsurra started his flashback. But why don't any of your figures have hair?!

Oh, and I somehow have the feeling you don't have a clone Battlepack...
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Jens on Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:57 pm

Holy Boom is strong!Razz (yeah yeah he's using the force)


This was really nice, way better flashbacks in this one, oh and all grey city? FINALLY! Wink
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Gerrard on Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:03 pm

Pretty nice GIMPing, I like the flashback picture here and it's funny how he keeps saying boy. Razz
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Sialboats on Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:33 pm

Aaaaah. This was well worth the not-so-admirable comics of days past. I really have to comment on the flow of the story, and the naturalness of the dialog. It's simply superb. My only complaints lie in a little shoddiness in a few of the frames' GIMPing, and the way Boom was holding Lashfura Wink .

But that's excusable 😁 .
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Alpha on Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:46 pm

Err... I doubt a Jeedai could carry a full grown Wookiee across a battlefield. Laughing

But it was nice, the flashback was pretty obvious (Kudos for the 1 COLOR CITY), I liked it.

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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Zepher on Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:37 am

PhiMa wrote:Not bad, the gimping was done well, but maybe pick a different background for sky next time. I liked how there was a flash of light when Lofsurra started his flashback. But why don't any of your figures have hair?!

Oh, and I somehow have the feeling you don't have a clone Battlepack...

That's correct, no clone battle pack.

As for the hairless people... there are only 3 in this comic. While Versilles just doesn't have hair, something I have been called out on already, the others were meant to be soldiers, so would have shaved heads.

Alpha wrote:Err... I doubt a Jeedai could carry a full grown Wookiee across a battlefield. Laughing

But it was nice, the flashback was pretty obvious (Kudos for the 1 COLOR CITY), I liked it.

THERE'S A BATTLEFIELD! Shocked

Thanks everyone else! Except for Sial, sorta, who wihile calling this comic awesome, insulted all the others. I wasn't happy with the last one, ut most of the older ones were good too Razz
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Sialboats on Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:41 am

Zepher wrote: I wasn't happy with the last one, ut most of the older ones were good too Razz

That's what I meant, Zeph Wink. The last two were.... meh.
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by MasterBrettKenobi on Sun Jun 28, 2009 1:39 am

The episode was great! Smile The person I like in the episode is Boom and the wookie jedi. Great job man, you really out done yourself this time. Smile Laughing
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Jun 28, 2009 4:31 am

How the hell does that Wookiee speak Basic? I thought their vocal cords were incapable of doing so...
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by MasterBrettKenobi on Sun Jun 28, 2009 4:39 am

Jedi Joe wrote:How the hell does that Wookiee speak Basic? I thought their vocal cords were incapable of doing so...

Well, jedi and others use translation devises to have them speak english basically. Smile
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Jens on Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:01 am

MasterBrettKenobi wrote:
Jedi Joe wrote:How the hell does that Wookiee speak Basic? I thought their vocal cords were incapable of doing so...

Well, jedi and others use translation devises to have them speak english basically. Smile

No! Jedi's use the force to communicate if they have to.

Others use droids.
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:07 am

Just put it down to babelfish or translator microbes and move along. Razz
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by MasterBrettKenobi on Sun Jun 28, 2009 6:48 pm

Jens wrote:
MasterBrettKenobi wrote:
Jedi Joe wrote:How the hell does that Wookiee speak Basic? I thought their vocal cords were incapable of doing so...

Well, jedi and others use translation devises to have them speak english basically. Smile

No! Jedi's use the force to communicate if they have to.

Others use droids.

Oh yeah, I forgot about that. But sometimes Jedi aren't trained to use the force to communicate, its just like you said, they usually have to use protocal droids to translate.
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by Zepher on Sun Jun 28, 2009 10:29 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Just put it down to babelfish or translator microbes and move along. Razz

I was hoping everyone would just assume that. Thanks for the wonderfully constructive comments Joe and Jinja. Mad
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by 667thLegion on Sun Jun 28, 2009 11:11 pm

I thought it was good, that sky background is beautiful, and the dialog is great. I really liked the sentence about the clones not having names, but just a bunch of numbers. Nicely done. Smile
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Re: Episode 12: The Battle for Nekt: Prey

Post by cln-cmndo on Thu Jul 02, 2009 7:20 pm

Wonderful GIMPing. The background was awesome.
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