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Riot at the Bank of Brentaal

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Post by Sialboats Mon Jul 06, 2009 4:53 pm

Part of a widespread terrorist bombing campaign by the Separatists, the H9-M1 strain of Hive Virus was released into several bustling locations in Galactic City. The Coruscant Branch of Brentaal IV's banking firm was one of these targets. Over 10,000 people were present in the complex, that day - making transactions, buying stocks, and insuring goods. Business continued for roughly thirty minutes after the terrorists had released the pathogen into the ventilation system, when customers and bankers alike began bleeding from the eyes and eventually their entire face - as the pores of their skin began to widen exponentially. The hive virus, notorious for spreading quickly and causing madness, now was causing physiological damage: causing those afflicted with it to bleed slowly to death.

When gas-masked GCPD officers, and clones from the 541st who were supposed to be on leave arrived outside, the near-insane victims began to panic. As they destroyed anything they came in contact with, in a mad fit of rage, fires broke out inside the bank - exacerbating the problem. Faced with either fiery death, or the possibility of escape, the infected who hadn't collapsed and died now swarm upon the perimeter teams.


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I'm debating whether or not to submit this as my Quarantine contest entry, or to do one showing the failed attempt to stop the virus's release into the ventilation system. I wish we could just post as many submissions as we'd like Razz .
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Post by Zepher Mon Jul 06, 2009 4:57 pm

This is awesome sial. You really worked hard to pack in a lot of detail, and it certainly paid off. I'll have to work very hard if I want to try to beat you out in this contest.
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Post by Alpha Mon Jul 06, 2009 4:59 pm

The bottom level is awesome, the building is nice as well, and the infected people and the gas-masked GCPD (Whatever that might mean, besides Gotham City, unless it's Galactic City Razz ) look well suited. Awesome job, no?
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Post by Green Tee Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:18 pm

Great GIMPing Sial. It gives me the idea the people who haven't bled to death are zombies. Great theme!
And the blue side, is that like the security camera recording of how it looked?


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Post by Cyrus Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:18 pm

Dang that's awesome! I like how you did the blue effect! Smile
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Post by Bizzle Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:34 pm

Dang this is awesome Sial. I like the GCPD officers alot and the use of the snowie helms as gas masks is very good thinking. All I see wrong is the windows, I would think the windows might be a little bit bigger with some type of force field. Other then that this MOC is a win.
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Post by Delta 1608 Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:54 pm

Wow, *mouth drops a few inches*Hola Wow! I don't know what to say, every detail is perfect, I'm speechless.
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Post by Gerrard Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:33 pm

Wow, excellent work Sial. If you do submit this people will have some work to do! I love the guy jumping out the window and excellent GIMPing.
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Post by Sialboats Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:53 pm

Darth Bizzle wrote:Dang this is awesome Sial. I like the GCPD officers alot and the use of the snowie helms as gas masks is very good thinking. All I see wrong is the windows, I would think the windows might be a little bit bigger with some type of force field. Other then that this MOC is a win.

Yeah, I was experimenting with the windows a little. I didn't feel like doing the drab square windows, so I went for triangular ones. It still didn't turn out as right as I'd have liked it Razz .
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Post by flare Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:32 pm

Gerrard wrote:Wow, excellent work Sial. If you do submit this people will have some work to do! I love the guy jumping out the window and excellent GIMPing.
Nope, not for me! I should Sial a preview of mine. And he said he will probably have to do a V2. Wink
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Post by Tac Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:33 pm

Definitely the best entry so far! Razz
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Post by Sialboats Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:34 pm

flare wrote:
Gerrard wrote:Wow, excellent work Sial. If you do submit this people will have some work to do! I love the guy jumping out the window and excellent GIMPing.
Nope, not for me! I should Sial a preview of mine. And he said he will probably have to do a V2. Wink

We'll see... we'll see Wink .


Tac wrote:Definitely the best entry so far! Razz

It's the only entry so far Razz .
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Post by legorevolution Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:03 am

One of your, if not the, best mocs yet Sial. You always do a good job incorporating those tan pieces into buildings, and throwing in some foliage here an there. Smile Great background story as usual, you should honestly think about becoming a writer when you are older. My personal favorite piece in this moc were those chrome guards/soldiers. They look fantastic, and I might have to borrow them in the future. Smile
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Post by Commando Shade Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:33 am

When did the 541st get to Galactic City? I swear they were at Anison.

Other than the problem with time, amazing work! The "infected" really look like they are running for their lives. Bravo!
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Post by Alpha Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:39 am

IT'S IN THE FUTURE! Surprised

Noobs these days... I swear. Razz
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Post by Rook Tue Jul 07, 2009 2:52 pm

Commando Shade wrote:When did the 541st get to Galactic City? I swear they were at Anison.

Other than the problem with time, amazing work! The "infected" really look like they are running for their lives. Bravo!

Ok seriously dude they don't exist! Think about it! CC can I just delete people for being... Embarassed
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:40 pm

Alpha wrote:IT'S IN THE FUTURE! Surprised

Noobs these days... I swear. Razz
Did you not watch the movies? "A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away..."

Noobs these days... I swear. Razz
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Post by Sialboats Tue Jul 07, 2009 3:57 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Alpha wrote:IT'S IN THE FUTURE! Surprised

Noobs these days... I swear. Razz
Did you not watch the movies? "A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away..."

Noobs these days... I swear. Razz

Fine, the future of the past Razz .



Oxymoron aside - yeah, it's post Ansion Wink .
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Post by Alpha Tue Jul 07, 2009 4:18 pm

Future of the past...

Whatever. Razz
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Post by Awesome-o-saurus Tue Jul 07, 2009 7:22 pm

Separatists make zombies, Republic rejoices at being able to go zombie hunting for real. The post-apocolyptic genre and Star Wars genre now have a chance at being merged!
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Jul 08, 2009 3:42 pm

You do a great job making facades of buildings with your tan bricks, and I absolutely love your riot police. Great work on this whole MOC!
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