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Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

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Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:31 pm

Season 1
Episode 13
The Battle of Nekt: Drugs


Last Episode:
Lofsurra flashed back to finding Boom, while Clone Sir and Versilles talked.













































Enjoy! I was happy to include AlphA in a comic! All credit for the orginal AlphA design goes to, of course, Alpha!

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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by -Aki- on Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:36 pm

Awesome! I love the way you included AlphA, and how we learn a bit more about Vimpu. Who are those guys with those space helmets? Some sort of polcie force?
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Alpha on Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:37 pm

So, a bunch of security plants a charge on a vehicle, it explodes, and AlphA 'bounty hunters' just run away and get choked to death? Though there should've been cratefulls of those plants, otherwise, you should just blow that thing to hell. Razz

Nice flashback, though at the end, there could've been more to it rather than "I'm gonna get you off that rock, boy", maybe a line saying "I have a gunship and 2 fighter escorts on route, we're bringing in backup. ETA 1 hour." or something. Wink But it was nice, the fire effect might've been a bit odd, but hey.


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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:38 pm

-Aki- wrote:Awesome! I love the way you included AlphA, and how we learn a bit more about Vimpu. Who are those guys with those space helmets? Some sort of polcie force?

They're the rebels from the first and second flash back that Versille had. Here's the one with the Obi head!





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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Sialboats on Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:39 pm

Splendid little comic, I appreciate how you're weaving together the various elements of CABG's factions into a story - so that we'll have a more coherent tale! My only complaint lies in the AlphA ship. It's a bit too much like the platform on which the police were standing. It was troublesome to differentiate between the two on my first read-through Wink . And I do think you overdid that fire a little, but that's excusable Razz .

Overall, a solid episode with no glaring errors Smile .
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Rook on Mon Jul 06, 2009 7:40 pm

Clearly I need to work on my Photoshop skills or check GIMP 'cause that was nicely done.

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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by why on Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:14 pm

Well atleast we know why Versilles has the police torso. Wink

Use a spell checker. --R
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Jens on Mon Jul 06, 2009 10:33 pm

One of my favorite episodes so far!

One problem, all the sets are so nice but then the frame with gruff is very plain, kinda ruins it me thinks.
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Gerrard on Tue Jul 07, 2009 12:46 am

Very nicely done! The inclusion of the AlphA is pretty cool, pretty nice GIMPing and it has a nice story behind it. Well done once again!
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Zepher on Wed Jul 08, 2009 7:48 pm

why wrote:Well atleast we know why Versilles has the police torso. Wink

Use a spell checker. --R

Very observant. It goes a little bit more into that later.

And Alpha, they're not security, they're rebels.
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Re: Episode 13: The Battle of Nekt: Drugs

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 13, 2009 12:04 am

Next episode's going to take a while. Alpha has kindly agreed to do the lightsaber effects for me, but it could still take some work.

I'm also going to wait a while before doing me eisodes since I only have 3 normal PI clones.
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