Operation Quarantine, Stalking the enemy

CTC209458 and CTC398534 where following a droid patrol one summer Wotarien day. The droids's plan to scout out the area whent horriblely wrong. The Clones took cover as an large number of infected people ambushed the Droid patrol. We intercepted this message from the Droids.

BDC009277495748..... to Garducka

[shooting] Uh-oh, Trade Federtion patrol number 5734054 under attack form third party. We require back up. [sceam] [mechine gun fire] Uh-oh.[Clunk] roger....gor, yes...r...uh-ooooohhhhhhhh...........

The enemy's enemy is not our freind.

That's not Coruscant at all.

DarthPineapple wrote:That's not Coruscant at all.

Thank you. I refuse to critique until this grievous error is rectified .

Sorry, but it's way too plain. And no, it's not coruscant, also, do they use yellow doors like that?

Firstly, that's not Coruscant, secondly, there are no Battle Droids on Coruscant, and thirdly, well, I have nothing else to say then do it again.

Wasn't it supposed to be a 16x16 vig?

That too.

As a side note, all interested members, please actually read the rules, unless you want to turn out like this.

Though the MOC itself isn't bad, besides the fact that it's just plates and bricks, it needs more details.

Though the execution was performed alright, what was executed was not anything remotely close to the contest rules. Make sure you re-read them before you try to re-enter Lukas.

I never said I was entering this one.

Then why name it after the contest?

You said Operation Quarantine, it's quite obvious that you were planning to enter it, but decided against it due to the amount of critisism.

But nontheless, it's a nice bignette, though it lacks details and wreckage.

I made a secound one, this is just because I wanted to show off some landscapeing.

Commander Lukas wrote:I made a secound one, this is just because I wanted to show off some landscapeing.

Then why did you name the entry the name of the contest?

Well on the subject of the moc, I like how the clone is tilting his head. It gives him a nice intent look.

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