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Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

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Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by George Kemper on Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:41 pm

A scene of two ARC Troopers holding on to a bridge. They are the only survivors of their squad. And what they don't know is that help isn't coming.







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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by Alpha on Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:43 pm

The "towers" don't look that nice, but the bridge itself is good, even though it lacks detail. Overall, it's pretty good.

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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by blackninjatom on Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:05 pm

I like the cover that the red clone is using, but I think the rest could use some more polish. It's a good start though.
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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by moosacow on Thu Jul 16, 2009 8:49 pm

It's nice, but you should've shown wreckage and detail in that category.
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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by Sithassassin on Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:05 pm

Glad to see your here George, it was really fun meeting you in BW! I agree with AlphA that the towers could use some work. I als odon't really like the mixed greys. The bunker is pretty cool and so is the snow slope thing. Overall I think you could have done better.
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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by 667thLegion on Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:14 pm

May I suggest adding some more greebles to the ground, just as some reckage looking stuff. Other than that, it's a nice little scene. Smile
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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by Sialboats on Thu Jul 16, 2009 9:47 pm

It's... plain.

It needs greebles, it needs elevation and scarring, it needs wreckage, it needs detailed battle damage. It needs a lot. You're on the right page though with the white studs and matching 1x1 cylinders. The spires are interesting, if unsubstantial. Work with that design, beef it up some, and then damage it appropriately.

It's got potential, but it's currently quite unremarkable.
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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by Gerrard on Thu Jul 16, 2009 10:10 pm

The 1x1 circular pieces aren't enough for the greebles. Add more wreckage and such like something that fell or is destroyed. It's not a bad MOC, but I wouldn't call it great.
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Re: Battle of the Bridge: Mygeeto

Post by astoriabluelegos on Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:31 pm

Another exceptional Mygeeto MOC, I love the design of this, espcially those spires, nice work. Smile Blue Arc
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