Clone Army Builders Guild
Welcome to the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.

Join the forum, it's quick and easy

Clone Army Builders Guild
Welcome to the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.
Clone Army Builders Guild
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

The 34th Legion (WIP)

3 posters

Go down

The 34th Legion (WIP) Empty The 34th Legion (WIP)

Post by mazz Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:35 pm

The 34th Legion





Legion - 4 Battalion (4,000 troops) led by the Clone Commander.
Battalion - 4 companies (1,000 troops) led by the Major.
Company - 4 platoons (250 troops) led by the Captain.
Platoon - 4 squads (50 troops) led by the Lieutenant.
Squad - 3 soldiers led by the Commander.



Ground and air vehicles:



The 34th Legion (WIP) Hpim2811

The 34th Legion Movies.
The 34th Legion I - Separatist Assault


Last edited by mazz on Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:25 am; edited 5 times in total
mazz
mazz
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 30
Location : some were in CANADA
The 34th Legion (WIP) Flag_c10

https://www.youtube.com/user/MazzucaArtz

Back to top Go down

The 34th Legion (WIP) Empty Re: The 34th Legion (WIP)

Post by PhiMa Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:43 pm

I'm pretty sure you're looking for the 34th legion, not the 34 legion.
PhiMa
PhiMa
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Age : 29
Location : A little east of boring and north of lame.
The 34th Legion (WIP) Flag_g10

http://www.flickr.com/photos/phima/

Back to top Go down

The 34th Legion (WIP) Empty Re: The 34th Legion (WIP)

Post by Sialboats Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:50 pm

Okay. Time to tear someone two new cheeks, here.

Uno - You need decriptions, stories, background information - and GOOD background information at that.
Dos - You copy-pasted from the legion guidelines.
Tres - Furthermore, you made that the only backbone your legion had.
Cuatro - Don't tell me it's a bloody WIP. This isn't even a WIP, yet. It's rubbish. When you make a legion, you need to have all that is expected in a good one ready to go. Vehicle photography, minifig photography, commanders, their subordinates, aforementioned backstory.
Cinco - There's no formatting. No color, no font changes, no nothing.

Seis - I really don't think this is Legion material yet Wow this thing looks'oh: , and if it isn't fixed up SOON, it should be deleted...




Why don't I have that roll emoticon.
Sialboats
Sialboats
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Florida, United States
The 34th Legion (WIP) Flag_u12

https://www.youtube.com/user/ChaationBergin

Back to top Go down

The 34th Legion (WIP) Empty Re: The 34th Legion (WIP)

Post by mazz Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:59 pm

I am still working on the back story and some Legions don't have a back story. I am not home at this time so I can't photography my commanders and thing like that.
mazz
mazz
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 30
Location : some were in CANADA
The 34th Legion (WIP) Flag_c10

https://www.youtube.com/user/MazzucaArtz

Back to top Go down

The 34th Legion (WIP) Empty Re: The 34th Legion (WIP)

Post by Sialboats Sat Jul 18, 2009 2:00 pm

Then don't put it up, yet! Patience is a darn scarce virtue....

Hopefully other people who want to make a legion see these comments and make sure they have a respectable layout BEFORE they create their thread...

Just fix this up, and soon - m'kay Wink !
Sialboats
Sialboats
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Florida, United States
The 34th Legion (WIP) Flag_u12

https://www.youtube.com/user/ChaationBergin

Back to top Go down

The 34th Legion (WIP) Empty Re: The 34th Legion (WIP)

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum