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Deploy Da ploy contest entry. (Updated)

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Which Moc version do you prefer.

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Post by Darman Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:47 pm

This is my entry to the "Deploy Da ploy" contest.

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Here is the main picture showing a clone trooper stepping of a speeder bike. Shooting down droids at a hidden Dantooine droid base.

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Here are the figures that are in the MOC,

This Moc is showing the part of the first wave of clone troopers that attack a droid base on the planet of Dantooine. The commander of "Squad 467" also known as "The Red arm's" is part of the front line of attackers along with another member of his squad. They split from the main mass of troopers to attack the side of the base were the anti air cannons are housed so the Republic gunships could provide air support from the many vulture droids on there way.

Here is the flickr set. http://www.flickr.com/photos/40053950@N06/sets/72157621569987663/

Here is the second version of the MOC. Please tell me which you think is better.

Here is the main picture showing a clone trooper stepping of a speeder bike. Shooting down droids at a hidden Dantooine droid base.
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Side view
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Other side view
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Other views i wish for you to see
http://www.flickr.com/photos/40053950@N06/3738964993/in/set-72157621622746159/

http://www.flickr.com/photos/40053950@N06/3739758196/in/set-72157621622746159/

That is both versions of the MOC. Please tell me wich one you prefer.


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Post by RubbahBand Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:49 pm

Very cool but the speeder I would say needs work. Wink
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Post by Darman Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:55 pm

Anomanzor wrote:Very cool but the speeder I would say needs work. Wink

I see what you mean.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sun Jul 19, 2009 10:29 pm

Your Midnette is alright, but the speeder is a simple two studs wide...I mean, that is standard, but hey at least throw some variety or something in there.
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Post by Darman Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:57 am

Clonecommando007 wrote:Your Midnette is alright, but the speeder is a simple two studs wide...I mean, that is standard, but hey at least throw some variety or something in there.

I was going to try a different desgin maybe a type of low assault small sized shuttle? With them dropping down on cords maybe.
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Post by Gerrard Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:15 pm

Not bad, but the speeder looks like it just had some pieces thrown on there to make it look full, the greebling on the ground is pretty good, but some more details on the wall would be nice.
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Post by Sialboats Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:20 pm

All that needs to be said... has been.

Greebles are good, speeder's crap. But what I'm looking at is the detail of the structure. There isn't much behind it but plate, 1xn bricks, greebles, droids. There's no jutting turrets (not guns; architectural feature), no sturdy battlements, no stylized walls, not much of anything. Even if it's a military instillation, it still needs more to it. You can make something detailed in structure (not greebles) and still term it "prefabricated" or "utilitarian".


It's fine as it is, but there could be more to it Wink .
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Post by Darman Mon Jul 20, 2009 5:07 pm

Sialboats wrote:All that needs to be said... has been.

Greebles are good, speeder's crap. But what I'm looking at is the detail of the structure. There isn't much behind it but plate, 1xn bricks, greebles, droids. There's no jutting turrets (not guns; architectural feature), no sturdy battlements, no stylized walls, not much of anything. Even if it's a military instillation, it still needs more to it. You can make something detailed in structure (not greebles) and still term it "prefabricated" or "utilitarian".


It's fine as it is, but there could be more to it Wink .
Thank you for your suggestions! I just updated the basic flooring with more grebbles and more detail on the wall (No much on the wall though). I am going to post the new desgin now well if they would upload to flickr without crashing firefox! Mad I am planning out a bigger version of this so i can add more structural detail but I don't think it will make the contest deadline.
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Post by CT44 Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:27 am

Remember to post this into the entries thread for it to count.
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Post by Darman Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:11 am

CT44 wrote:Remember to post this into the entries thread for it to count.

I believe I did but thank you for reminding me.
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Post by Darman Tue Jul 21, 2009 11:19 pm

Wow it certainly seems like the second one is better according to members but I am stumped about who would choose the first? Can people post on what they voted for and why? Thank you! A toast!
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Post by Gerrard Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:29 am

Well, I voted for the second one even though it is not much change from the first.
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Post by Darman Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:49 pm

Gerrard wrote:Well, I voted for the second one even though it is not much change from the first.

There was some changes in the flooring that you can only notice from the side and overhead shot's.
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Post by Alpha Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:54 pm

The flooring doesn't matter, fix up that damned speeder, or it'll still look the same. Wink
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Post by Darman Wed Jul 22, 2009 3:58 pm

[AlphA] wrote:The flooring doesn't matter, fix up that damned speeder, or it'll still look the same. Wink

Already took it apart Waaa! but I am planning on making it larger so I can add more structure to it like Sialboats said. Then I will probably just ditch the speeder idea and add something else. So hopefully I can make it look a lot better on my third try. A toast!
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