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Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

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Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:43 am

Season 1
Episode 14
The Battle of Nekt: Death


Catch-up:
Versilles, Boom and Lofsurra, along with three clones named Cell, Sir, and unknown clone #12, are trying to escape the planet Nekt, on which they are stranded. Gruff is sending them a rescue team, whle the Dark Jedi still lurks around somewhere.

Many thanks to Alpha for the sabers, which I promtly ruined by adding light to the scene. I now know that lighting effects should be added before light sabers... oh well.


































(This is the only part I feel needs some clarification, Sir, the blue armed clone, fell from the gunship, probaly pulled down by the Dark Jedi using the force)

















I hope that Lofsurra's death at least minorly made you sad. I know you didn't really get a chance to know him, but you will have well known character's dying at some point. His is the first death of many! :grin:

And, since it's the end of a story arc, here's the questions!

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).

2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?

-Zeph


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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by 667thLegion on Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:51 am

You must enjoy killing off characters if you say that there will be many more to come! Nice comic though, and I was saddened by the death of Lofsurra. Wink
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Jens on Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:55 am

NOWAI!1! Hola Wow!



Razz


I saw Alpha's photo. Earlier, next time tell him to make them private so he doesn't ruin it. Wink
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:57 am

I knew flickr regulars would know the ending, I'm not too broken up over it. If I can ever learn to actually make those sabers without my computer crashing... Mad
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Post by Jens on Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:02 am

I hope we get to know if the furball and policeman were tight since he went all wussy over his death. Razz
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:07 am

Oh, I forgot the questioneer, which I should include since we're at the end of another story arc.

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).

2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?

I'll edit them into the first post as well. Don't feel you have to answer them, but please do, as they'll improve me greatly!
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Jens on Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:18 am

Zepher wrote:

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).
Err....The last one, we got a person to die. Kid
I liked the one with AlphA.


2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?
Furball

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?
Err.People get on drug planet...flash backs about rebels and secret plans...furball dies...cry cry cry.

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?
BLOOD! kid
More of the grey sets.



I bet the bold letters don't count, right Rook?
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Sialboats on Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:16 pm

Ahahah! Someone's finally got the hang of the lighting effects! Splendid work with both the GIMP, and the overall comic. The minifigure positioning could have been done better, and some of the photography is questionable (no unique shots, nothing to vary the comic up a bit), but all in all it's quite solid.


Zepher wrote:

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).
I have to say, I really did enjoy this one.

2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?
Loshfurra (Or however it may be spelled)
Kuplo
Gruff
Sir
Versilles
Mr. Dark Jedi


3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?
Evacuation of Nekt, last gunship off planet's surface shot down, protagonists confronted by Mr. Dark Jedi. Escape the wrath of Mr. Dark Jedi by blowing themselves off a cliff, series of flashbacks detailing past experiences of protagonists. Rescue gunship arrives, duel, fin.

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?
Actual combat. It's Star WARS, after all. Finding a balance between plot and shooty-shooting-whiz-bangery is challenging (I still haven't worked it out), but it's something to think of! You don't necessarily have to show the SSWB-ry, but scenes and dialog which makes it feel as though there are cogs grinding in the larger War Machine would be a possibility Wink. And a little contiguity of story. I remember a quote that "the best stories are told chronologically". Splitting the story all up by using flashbacks and different seasons is weakening your story some Razz. Sometimes, it's good to be linear!

-Boat
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Zepher on Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:31 pm

Thanks for feed-back Jens and Sial! You guys are always very helpful, and I'm incredibly thankful for it.

Now, I've just got to figure out how to get publicity... Razz
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by PhiMa on Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:34 pm

Zepher wrote:

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14).
This too, was probably my favourite.
2. Could you name the main character's of this arc?
Lofsurra, Kuplo, Gruff, Versilles and the Dark Jedi

3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?
Nekt is evac'd, last gunship is stopped by Dark Jedi, Good Jedi run away on Cliff, fall off cliff, make it back to gunship, wookie is killed. Several Flashbacks inbetween.

4. What do you want to see more of from now on?
No more police suits. These are Jedi. Please give them Robes. Oh, and you need to pick up a BP. Razz Also, this planet was quite nice. Maybe you could try more Jungle atmospheres.

Happy?
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Cyrus on Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:42 pm

Very good plot.Expecily how Lofsurra dies.Good Smile , but sad Sad .
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Alpha on Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:26 am

1. What was your favorite episode in this story arc (episodes 10-14)?

Probably this one.


2. Could you name the main characters of this arc?

Versilles
Boom
Lofsurra
Dark Jedi
Gruff


3. Would you be able to do a very basic recap of this story arc? Could you try to?

*Yawn* 4 Jedi, leading an evac of the planet, gets engaged with a Dark Jedi, who proceeds to stalk them, and eventually murders Lofsurra, who was saving one of your few Clones.


4. What do you want to see more of from now on?

Hmm. Maybe an actual battle? You really should get more battlepacks, and make a scene. With that, and your nice sets, that'd really make a hell of a comic. Smile

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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Zepher on Tue Jul 21, 2009 3:58 pm

Thanka Alpha, and you too Phima. you guys are another two who are constantly helpful. And yes, the next planet will be a large scale battle, but that's still a few comics away!
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by -Aki- on Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:01 pm

It's a shame that dude died. He was well cool...

But anyway, this was great! It was very action-packed, yet still kept to the plot.
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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by Alpha on Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:07 pm

Zepher wrote:Thanka Alpha, and you too Phima. you guys are another two who are constantly helpful. And yes, the next planet will be a large scale battle, but that's still a few comics away!

Oh, and please, for the love of Jeedai, replace those Police torsos! Razz

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Re: Episode 14: The Battle of Nekt: Death

Post by RubbahBand on Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:11 pm

That was a excellent comic there although, I would hope to see Lofsurra as a ghost. Smile
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