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Post by mazz Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:51 pm

I was at family so I made this.

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I think it need work.

What do you think?

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Post by DarthPineapple Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:54 pm

The back 'flaps' are too short and long (use 3x3 wedges) and the bride points too much forward. Also remove the middle dark red tile(s). Other than that it looks pretty good!
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Post by Cyrus Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:02 pm

I kinda like it like the way it is. Smile
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Post by Rogue Jedi Mon Jul 20, 2009 9:14 pm

Meh, It needs a bit of work.
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Post by 80-0 Mon Jul 20, 2009 9:19 pm

The engines should not be yellow: they should be trans light blue.

As DP said the bridge pieces should be halfway centered over the piece that is holding them.

The red 2x2 below and between the bridges looks out of place in my opinion.

Also, as DP said, the rear wedges need to be flushed out a tad wider.

Otherwise it looks OK: the center-front looks the best in my view.
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Post by mazz Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:39 pm

80-0 wrote:The engines should not be yellow: they should be trans light blue.

As DP said the bridge pieces should be halfway centered over the piece that is holding them.

The red 2x2 below and between the bridges looks out of place in my opinion.

Also, as DP said, the rear wedges need to be flushed out a tad wider.

Otherwise it looks OK: the center-front looks the best in my view.

Ok thank you everyone. 80-0 and DP, when I put it halfway it did not look good.
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Post by Garet6 Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:41 pm

It should look more like this:

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Blue engines!
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Post by mazz Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:44 pm

When I made it I used this, Venator-class Star Destroyer Venator_clonewars

To make it and there was no blue on it.

At Garet6: I can't get them to glow. Razz
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Post by Garet6 Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:46 pm

mazz wrote:...there was no blue on it.

Have you ever see Star Wars? Laughing
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Post by mazz Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:48 pm

Garet6 wrote:
mazz wrote:...there was no blue on it.

Have you ever see Star Wars? Laughing

Laughing Yes I have. Oh well.
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Post by blackninjatom Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:52 pm

@ Garet: Have you got a link to that venator? That pic is nice. I think the front stripe is too wide, along with the previous suggestions on the bridge and back "wings".
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Post by Garet6 Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:22 pm

blackninjatom wrote:@ Garet: Have you got a link to that venator? That pic is nice.

Thank you, I did it myself! I can upload a better pic of it if you want.
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Post by 80-0 Mon Jul 20, 2009 11:33 pm

@ BNT: Good point: it shouldn't dilate as it gets nearer to the bridge.
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Post by Gerrard Tue Jul 21, 2009 12:14 am

Hmm, it looks pretty nice for a program model, though something just looks wrong to me. The back side flaps may be a bit to straight, but I may be wrong. Otherwise, pretty cool.
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Post by frrylander55 Tue Jul 21, 2009 12:21 am

It looks quite good. The back wing flaps are too short. Also, are you going to upload the model onto the lego website. If you fix it up a little. I will buy it from Lego.com. What is the current price for it?
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Post by mazz Tue Jul 21, 2009 12:52 am

frrylander55 wrote:It looks quite good. The back wing flaps are too short. Also, are you going to upload the model onto the lego website. If you fix it up a little. I will buy it from Lego.com. What is the current price for it?

Thank you, but sorry you can't buy it, it has bricks that won't let me upload to Lego.
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Post by cln-cmndo Tue Jul 21, 2009 9:24 pm

I like it, but the red stripe is too wide.
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