Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike
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Luke
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Master Potato
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M'kay, my next build for my film. I'm much more satisfied with this than my SoroSuub. The control mechanism took a while to figure out, but I think I got a good one. Most of what I'm building with these speeders is experimentation, so tell me what ya think.
SithFilmer- Guild Member
- Age : 31
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Mean swoop! Though, if I were you, I'd take a couple of those yellow hands off, it makes the middle section look a bit spiky.
Master Potato- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 27
Location : Alderaan, wondering why we've got a new moon...
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Great idea! Maybe the guns down a little so they level out, but that's it.
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@ mp: The yellow hands are fine in my opinion: they could be an especial ornamentation.
@ ck: What guns?
@ name: I like how you get accurate company names to go along with your MOCs: they seem less 'made up', to put it bluntly.
@ ck: What guns?
@ name: I like how you get accurate company names to go along with your MOCs: they seem less 'made up', to put it bluntly.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
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That was the point...Master Potato wrote:Mean swoop! Though, if I were you, I'd take a couple of those yellow hands off, it makes the middle section look a bit spiky.
Guns? What guns? There are no guns on there.CommanderKill wrote:Great idea! Maybe the guns down a little so they level out, but that's it.
Thanks guys!
Edit: Aha, thanks 80-0!
SithFilmer- Guild Member
- Age : 31
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Looking again at it I think he thought those two hands underneath the speeder on that extending clip were guns... even though they were pointed straight up, and firing them would thus result in destroying one's own speeder.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
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Location : New York, New YORK!
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Then what are those on the front of the speeder? That's what I meant when saying those could be leveled out.
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CommanderKill wrote:Then what are those on the front of the speeder? That's what I meant when saying those could be leveled out.
Read my post and be thus educated.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike
Nice Moc. I think that is one of the best speeders ever. Maybe you should take off 1 or 2 hands. Other than that great.
Legostarwarsfan- Age : 27
Location : Outer rim
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Where did you get the yellow seat thing from?
Luke- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 27
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Looks excellent LP! I love the seat design and the use of hands on it is pretty cool. Well done!
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Some Town set with a yellow tricycle.Luke wrote:Where did you get the yellow seat thing from?
Thanks! But, uh... "LP"?Gerrard wrote:Looks excellent LP! I love the seat design and the use of hands on it is pretty cool. Well done!
SithFilmer- Guild Member
- Age : 31
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Think he got you and LP mixed, seeing as you are both awesome brickfilmers !
Anyway, I like this! The design flows, and I love the front. Nice work.
Anyway, I like this! The design flows, and I love the front. Nice work.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Loving the "spiky" look to it. The nose of the speeder is nice and long. (I like large Speeder Bikes)
Can't wait to see (and write up a majorly large review) your next film.
Can't wait to see (and write up a majorly large review) your next film.
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Looks pretty good Sith, I like the colors. I do have a few suggestions though. The yellow hands on the piping up front on the bike look great, but drop the others. Also when the piping first connects to the mainframe of the bike, they just end suddenly. Drop that trans-orange cheese slope facing inwards, and replace it with two yellow (if you have them) cheese slopes facing outwards into the piping, just to blend the flow of the bike better.
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