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Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

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Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by SithFilmer on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:05 pm



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M'kay, my next build for my film. I'm much more satisfied with this than my SoroSuub. The control mechanism took a while to figure out, but I think I got a good one. Most of what I'm building with these speeders is experimentation, so tell me what ya think.
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by Master Potato on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:16 pm

Mean swoop! Though, if I were you, I'd take a couple of those yellow hands off, it makes the middle section look a bit spiky. Smile
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Post by Green Tee on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:17 pm

Great idea! Maybe the guns down a little so they level out, but that's it.
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by 80-0 on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:29 pm

@ mp: The yellow hands are fine in my opinion: they could be an especial ornamentation. Wink

@ ck: What guns?

@ name: I like how you get accurate company names to go along with your MOCs: they seem less 'made up', to put it bluntly.

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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by SithFilmer on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:30 pm

Master Potato wrote:Mean swoop! Though, if I were you, I'd take a couple of those yellow hands off, it makes the middle section look a bit spiky. Smile
That was the point... Razz
CommanderKill wrote:Great idea! Maybe the guns down a little so they level out, but that's it.
Guns? What guns? There are no guns on there.

Thanks guys!

Edit: Aha, thanks 80-0!
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by 80-0 on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:32 pm

Looking again at it I think he thought those two hands underneath the speeder on that extending clip were guns... even though they were pointed straight up, and firing them would thus result in destroying one's own speeder. Razz

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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by Green Tee on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:34 pm

Then what are those on the front of the speeder? That's what I meant when saying those could be leveled out.
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Post by 80-0 on Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:34 pm

CommanderKill wrote:Then what are those on the front of the speeder? That's what I meant when saying those could be leveled out.

Read my post and be thus educated.

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Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by Legostarwarsfan on Sat Aug 01, 2009 11:04 pm

Nice Moc. I think that is one of the best speeders ever. Maybe you should take off 1 or 2 hands. Other than that great.
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by Luke on Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:45 am

Where did you get the yellow seat thing from?
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by Gerrard on Mon Aug 03, 2009 2:10 pm

Looks excellent LP! I love the seat design and the use of hands on it is pretty cool. Well done!
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by SithFilmer on Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:33 pm

Luke wrote:Where did you get the yellow seat thing from?
Some Town set with a yellow tricycle.

Gerrard wrote:Looks excellent LP! I love the seat design and the use of hands on it is pretty cool. Well done!
Thanks! But, uh... "LP"?
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by -Aki- on Mon Aug 03, 2009 3:35 pm

Think he got you and LP mixed, seeing as you are both awesome brickfilmers Wow this thing looks!

Anyway, I like this! The design flows, and I love the front. Nice work.
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by (insert name here) on Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:46 pm

Loving the "spiky" look to it. The nose of the speeder is nice and long. (I like large Speeder Bikes)

Can't wait to see (and write up a majorly large review) your next film. Wink
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Re: Modified Mobquet Zephyr-G Swoop Bike

Post by legorevolution on Tue Aug 04, 2009 5:17 am

Looks pretty good Sith, I like the colors. I do have a few suggestions though. The yellow hands on the piping up front on the bike look great, but drop the others. Also when the piping first connects to the mainframe of the bike, they just end suddenly. Drop that trans-orange cheese slope facing inwards, and replace it with two yellow (if you have them) cheese slopes facing outwards into the piping, just to blend the flow of the bike better. Yellow
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