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Mini LAAT

Post by George Kemper on Wed Aug 05, 2009 3:54 am

This is my micro-scale LAAT Gunship. It has two anti-personal in the front and one in the back, two missle tubes, and four laser beam cannons two on the wings and two on either side of the ship. This as been on MOCpages for awhile now and just thought I should post it here to.





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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Green Tee on Wed Aug 05, 2009 3:56 am

Hola Wow! Tht's all I can really say. Hola Wow!
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Sithassassin on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:07 am

Meh, to be honest its ok. I think you could have done a lot more with it.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by George Kemper on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:15 am

Sithassassin wrote:Meh, to be honest its ok. I think you could have done a lot more with it.

I may do a V.2 some time in the future.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by cloneofthe501st on Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:54 am

Hola Wow! That one is way better than the old mini and the new Bricmaster (i think thats what its called) mini! You should do more minis! Again Hola Wow!

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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by PhiMa on Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:45 am

Not enough republic red, the green on the front should be lime, and make the bubble turrets clear. Otherwise it's pretty good.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Sialboats on Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:13 am

You've got the shape down perfectly, and I love your uses of the trans green dishes for the comp-beam laser bubbles. But their color makes me cringe. If you ever find some clear, or trans-grey ones - they'd be perfect for the job.

She could also use some dark red Wink .
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Nice

Post by thebluecrusader on Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:48 am

That is a very nice creations sir, well done, that's a thumbs up from me.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by 667thLegion on Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:33 pm

I think it is pretty good! Could you make some vauge instructions? That would be great. Smile
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by pdragon27 on Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:38 pm

Eh.... I'm with SA. The shape isn't really exact, and its really bulky, but IDK, maybe my many minutes of worshipping rogue_bantha's models is getting in the way...
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Post by 80-0 on Wed Aug 05, 2009 2:41 pm

I would get a thinner solution for the 'wings', perhaps avoid making the cockpit slab as thick as it is, and as PhiMa and Sial have called for, Republic Red en masse! Otherwise it's a tad blocky in the aft, but not a total loss, as those pod turrets are quite nicely done.

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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Gerrard on Wed Aug 05, 2009 3:15 pm

Wow, this is excellent. My only complaint, that there is too much white showing. When I first saw it I thought that it was ok, but the detail you put in is great. But some colors are needed, listen to the people above to what they said about the colors you should use. My suggestion: Republic Red.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Masterpeter on Sat Aug 08, 2009 11:10 pm

Shocked its okay

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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by blackninjatom on Sat Aug 08, 2009 11:49 pm

It isn't the best, but it's decent enough. I also suggest adding red, in there, and refining the shape of the wings.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by 11_seconds_older on Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:25 am

Masterpeter wrote:Shocked its okay

Might wanna use more than 5 words there champ Wink


It's cool, as has been said before, However, the colour scheme makes me think of the kid who sharpied his entire TLG gunship...

Seeing that the shape is pretty much perfect, I think you could improve by:

The missle tubes, replace with the long technique 'beams' in white.
The front, lime green, or, put more green or crimson somewhere else.
The wings, the hinges, make them white, or if you have them, green and white.
The Bubble turrets, make them clear, and put a dish on the bottom too.

Just my 10c, still, it's not without it's positives
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Gerrard on Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:06 am

11_seconds_older wrote:
Masterpeter wrote:Shocked its okay

Might wanna use more than 5 words there champ Wink


It's cool, as has been said before, However, the colour scheme makes me think of the kid who sharpied his entire TLG gunship...

Seeing that the shape is pretty much perfect, I think you could improve by:

The missle tubes, replace with the long technique 'beams' in white.
The front, lime green, or, put more green or crimson somewhere else.
The wings, the hinges, make them white, or if you have them, green and white.
The Bubble turrets, make them clear, and put a dish on the bottom too.

Just my 10c, still, it's not without it's positives

Did we have to use champ? Razz
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Nice

Post by Cpt. Crinkle on Mon Aug 10, 2009 4:59 pm

Good look for that size. Whitey
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Sialboats on Mon Aug 10, 2009 6:31 pm

Cpt. Crinkle wrote:Good look for that size. Whitey

Okay, I really can't report you for this, but could you PLEASE improve the quality of your posts. It's a frakking five word MINIMUM, not a maximum as it appears to be with you. There's much more you could comment on: What makes it look good for that size? How could he make it look better for that size? Why is that a good size to begin with? Why is size important at all?

So forth...

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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Brandon9 on Mon Aug 10, 2009 7:41 pm

Nice mini! I love all the detail you got into that small size, like the snotted wings, I'm just loven those! But as others have said before me, needs some republic red. Smile Fordo Yo!
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Re. Mini LAAT

Post by frrylander55 on Mon Aug 10, 2009 10:21 pm

I think you could do I a little more on it. It just looks plain and a little boring.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Gerrard on Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:01 pm

frrylander55 wrote:I think you could do I a little more on it. It just looks plain and a little boring.

And Sial just posted about quality of posts. Tell him HOW he can make it better.
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Post by frrylander55 on Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:43 am

Gerrard wrote:
frrylander55 wrote:I think you could do I a little more on it. It just looks plain and a little boring.

And Sial just posted about quality of posts. Tell him HOW he can make it better.

I think it needs more color to it.
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by 80-0 on Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:02 am

Now then, next time around, put that in the first post so Gerrard won't have to correct you. Wink

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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by astoriabluelegos on Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:50 am

This is one of the better mini Lartys I've seen, it looks pretty good. I would suggest trying to make those side bubble turrets more round, although I know this is not an easy task. Smile Blue Arc
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Re: Mini LAAT

Post by Gerrard on Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:03 pm

80-0 wrote:Now then, next time around, put that in the first post so Gerrard won't have to correct you. Wink

Well that is a first.


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