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Post by Darth Yoda on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:36 am

Yea, makin' this bad boy barracuda look sweet. Any ideas? Keep in mind that the back is still only 10% done....



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Post by Alpha on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:37 am

Mmm, much better than your other submarine (Shudders when thinking about it)...


The problem is that you leave the bottom somewhat flat, unlike the curved surface of the top. Wink

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Post by Green Tee on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:38 am

Since the back is 10% done... Nope I got nothin'. Looks great as always DY!
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Post by Darth Yoda on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:40 am

[AlphA] wrote:Mmm, much better than your other submarine (Shudders when thinking about it)...


The problem is that you leave the bottom somewhat flat, unlike the curved surface of the top. Wink

Oh, yea.

Good idea. The bottom of the front is not flat but I completely forgot about the other part....

Shocked

Anything else?
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Re: Submarine

Post by (insert name here) on Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:04 am

Be sure to make that tail larger.

Other than that....Yeah, I'm done.
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Re: Submarine

Post by 80-0 on Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:37 pm

You have too many black hands.

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Post by Gerrard on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:11 pm

Looks prett sweet so far, but I really got nothing, maybe have like a curve at the end?
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Post by 80-0 on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:14 pm

Also, looking at the sides... you have a stupid amount of dark bley rock pieces there. Surprised

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Re: Submarine

Post by Sialboats on Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:52 pm

I'm simply loving those frills running down the lower aft portion of the ship. It's splendidly smooth, and I enjoy the semi-SNOT technique that angles out the edges of the ship utilizing them nifty 2->1X2 Sloped Bricks Wink .
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Post by pdragon27 on Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:49 pm

Get rid of those 2x1 tiles. Use slopes instead.
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Re: Submarine

Post by Captain Tredge on Thu Aug 06, 2009 4:00 pm

It's looking really good. I love the use of those black hands.
Hmm...Improvements...Well try and make the tail better. You could make the tail triangular.
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Re: Submarine

Post by Darman on Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:46 pm

The Submarine body looks great! The thing that's bugging me is that the cockpit sticks out like a sore thumb Thumbs up. I would add more detail inside the cockpit when your building the back up but that's just my opinion. Other wise Amazing job!
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Post by legorevolution on Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:03 pm

the sleek design sweeping backwards is great. However from what I can see the tail/back needs some work. Another area that looks a little off is the slopes on the side right before it swoops inwards into the minifig hands on the tube. I really like all the hands on the tube though, gives it a great look. Is this a Sep. vessel?
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Re: Submarine

Post by Darth Yoda on Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:14 pm

I was making it for a bounty hunter but I'm still open to suggestions....
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Post by Bantha on Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:37 pm

Looks nice! Love the color scheme! Smile
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Post by legorevolution on Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:56 pm

It's also hard to pull off stripes and checkers in the same design. Wink
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Post by Darth Yoda on Fri Aug 07, 2009 4:15 am

legorevolution wrote:It's also hard to pull off stripes and checkers in the same design. Wink

Yea, I'm gunna switch it to all stripes... Thanks for the notice. Wink
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