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Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

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Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by Gerrard on Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:01 pm

Was messing around with GIMP and decided to try some things out with my contest entry.

Bungee Jumping



I didn't have the scared face so I did some editing. Razz



Here are the other images.

Unedited:



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Hope you like it!
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Re: Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by RubbahBand on Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:06 pm

Is this what clones do in there free time? Razz Looks good although I would make the Platform higher up.
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Re: Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by Gerrard on Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:07 pm

Yup, that's what the contest is about. Wink
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Re: Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by 80-0 on Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:15 pm

The editing in the second pic looks dreadful. Try and smooth out those edges and not make it look so abrupt. Wink

Also, I always wanted the head on the clone who's jumping back. I think it was only in a few soccer sets which I tried to get and one Drome racing set which I also tried to get. And yes, the platform could stand to be a good twenty feet higher.

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Re: Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by Luke on Tue Aug 11, 2009 11:57 pm

There are gaps between bricks on the top platform and the ground.

It isn't your best work, but the general idea is good.

Good luck in the contest!
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Re: Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by Alpha on Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:07 am

The text inside the bubbles looks poor, a bad crop job, terrible backdrop in the latter pictures, too blurry there.

Though it's fine, except for the uneven ground, it looks like you just put plates all over the place, you need to give it some better texture.

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Re: Shore Leave Entry: Bungee Jumping

Post by Gerrard on Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:19 am

[AlphA] wrote:
The text inside the bubbles looks poor, a bad crop job, terrible backdrop in the latter pictures, too blurry there.

Though it's fine, except for the uneven ground, it looks like you just put plates all over the place, you need to give it some better texture.

Is there a certain text that is needed?

And I didn't do the editing to perfection I know that, I didn't want it to be perfect. I said I was messing around. Razz
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