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321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

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321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by RubbahBand on Sat Aug 22, 2009 5:56 pm

321st Airborne Legion


The 321st was mostly a legion that aided other legions when they were in very harsh conditions such as few bases, supplies, and much of the such. The clones in this legion were well know for doing what they thought was best, if one clone stayed behind and wanted to save the civilians then they would have support from others within their group. The training of the clones was to be prepared for anything due to their pod could land anywhere. So they were always to be prepared.

Commander Ackler
Commander Ackler (CC-6675) was nicknamed Ackler after killing a Mutant Acklay on Yavin IV. He did this by going behind it and under it's stomach but what he used to kill it was a thermal detonator. Due to the fact that Acklay's were sensitive under there stomachs this exploded the Mutant Acklay and earned Ackler his nickname. During the Clone Wars he was commonly dropped in pods used by the 321st. These pods were dropped from a Venator Class Cruiser at low atmospheric pressures. When PII armor got rid of the PI armor and customized it like his PI armor.

Jedi General Krader Dawn
Jedi General Krader Dawn was a orphan from the very start his mother was divorced from his father, so he was out of the picture, his mother died during child birth. As he was in his childhood he was adopted by a man named Optar Lerguer. Optar came home everyday drunk and beat Krader and sent him away to his room. Krader eventually ran away from Optar and lived on the streets. Eventually he was founded by Jedi Master Mace Windu. Mace was interested in Krader due to his ability in the force from a young age of 11 years old. Later in Kraders life at age 26 he became a Jedi Knight. A year later after his promotion of Jedi Knight he joined the 321st Airborne Legion.

The 525th Stealth Regiment
The 525th Stealth Regiment specialized in reconnaissance missions.

The 326th Light Infantry Battalion
The 492nd Airborne Battalion
The 812th Heavy Infantry Battalion
The 184th Vehicle Battalion


The 431st Assault Regiment
The 431st Assault Regiment specialized in Vehicles, Heavy Infantry, And Mechanics.

The 594th Heavy Infantry Battalion
The 682nd Vehicle Battalion
The 528th Airborne Battalion
The 639th Light Vehicle Battalion


Tanbata Squadron
The Tanbata Squadren were a specialized group of three troopers well know to do good jobs on sabotaging and bringing down confederate bases.
First we have Slick the mechanical expert although he is mostly silent he gets the job done.
Second there is Kregor the boss of everyone in Tanbata Squadren. Kregor knows a little bit of everything but, he is a excellent gunslinger.
Lastly there is Racker the sharpshooter. His personality is a bit dim due to his past, no one knows what happened but it had to do with the bug scar straight down his back.


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Commander Ackler
Basic Troopers
Tanbata Squadron
Krader Dawn

C&C Welcome to my updated legion! Smile


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Re: 321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by wrecks on Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:22 am

Just so you know, your legion emblem is based on the Empire symble, not republic.
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Re: 321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Aug 23, 2009 4:59 am

Uh, wrecks...

This is the Empire Emblem Wink :



Anyway, some of the troops seem a bit generic, but the Tebnar unit is pretty cool. The Jedi looks nice, too.

Good work so far! Smile
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Re: 321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by wrecks on Sun Aug 23, 2009 5:50 am

Your right, but this is the propper Republic symbol. I read somewere the empire removed two spokes from the republic symbol so I thought that might be a variation on the Empire's. Oh well, I always end up failing myself >_<
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Re: 321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by Sialboats on Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:20 am

The legion is very... bland.

The emblem, well, there's not much to it. And when I say there's not much to it, I don't mean that simplistic shapes and colors are not what I'm looking for - in fact, those are what a Legion would most likely use to paint onto their units; I mean that it's just a Republic Insignia with a bunch of smears in it. Come on Wink .

The backstory is unimaginative and very, very short.

The minifigures are decent, but their lighting is rotten. Clearer, cleaner shots please!

I see no real structure to this legion. I can't see how the units would interact and support one another. It's just a basic infantry squad, and some elite fellows, and their Jedi general.


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Re: 321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by Alpha on Sun Aug 23, 2009 3:29 pm

Dark pictures, get some actual lighting. Then I'll actually give you some criticism.

And fix that backstory, isn't that what all Airborne Legions do?

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Re: 321st Airborne Legion *Completed*

Post by RubbahBand on Mon Sep 28, 2009 6:21 pm

Updated!
This is still currently a WIP! Wink
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