Rothana's Pride

This will be the flagship for my legion. I'm a little disapointed on how the pictures came out. Anyways it's a mini version of the ship because I tried to build a larger version but that just kinda...failed. So here it is, I don't really have much to say about it. The bridge I thought was an original idea...If it isn't let me know.

I hope you like it.

All C&C welcome.

That is the most original Flagship I have seen yet. By the way nice detailing.

So, I love it from the back to the middle. Just because the back is slanting I would like the front to be slightly slanted as well. Still it is really looking nice!

Ok, you want my opinion, here it is,

The bridges, How exactly is that original? It's like the sam design on most venators, two bridges spaced apart.
The back, looks like a total mess, To many exposed parts.
The front, all it looks like is a really flat venator.

It's not super original, as it looks like your where just trying to make a venator, and stuffed up.

I thought the angled plates would give it the illusion of it being slanted...

11_seconds_older wrote:Ok, you want my opinion, here it is,

The bridges, How exactly is that original? It's like the sam design on most venators, two bridges spaced apart.
The back, looks like a total mess, To many exposed parts.
The front, all it looks like is a really flat venator.

It's not super original, as it looks like your where just trying to make a venator, and stuffed up.

First I appologise for the double post, what I meant by original was in my specific design of the two bridges. I didn't mean I was making a completely different starship, it's supposed to be a venator.

DO NOT DOUBLE POST!

Is that clear enough for you? -TJN

Wait, so is a Venator or isn't it? Frankly, it looks like a Venator with the 'wings' moved back, so it's too similar to be anything else, but it's too different to really be a Venator. Also, it's pretty ugly, going from flat at the front to vertical at the bridge to I-don't-know-what-you-were-thinking at the back.

It's flat, painfully flat. You didn't add enough layers of plates so that it would look like it increased in height. The bridge has got a gaping hole in it, and the portion aft of the bridge is just strangely built. The coloration is nice, and the under-panel greebles are interesting, but...

...it really isn't very strong of a MOC, Xion.

It really looks like a venator that went through a junkyard. It's not really original at all. If you're gonna make an 'original' flagship, add some wacky different things. Also it is really jagged, alot of those pieces look tacked on. This needs more work and different inspiration I think.

Everything just looks so "blech". The middle is too skinny nd covered with random objects, the whole thing needs a bit of work.

Looks like the venator was cut in several pieces, and re-put together...

Try making it less Venator-like.

I think I'd describe this as "Bothawui Pride scrapped and put back together."

As others have pointed out it needs work. Also I would like to say the bridge seems to far forward, maby you should move it back a little bit.

I thought I'd give the venator a try but obviously you guys really dislike it. So I'll try to make a completely new type of star destroyer.

Yea, it looks like a distorted Venator. Not that original.

You have the back all bulky and the front all flat, you should fix that. Other than that good job.

I'm coming out with a V.2, it will be a combination of an acclamator, eclipse, and super star destroyer plus my own ideas too.

That is the awesomeness original mini capital ship ever.