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The Predator

Post by Gerrard on Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:20 pm

One of my best creations yet.

The Predator.

A heavy class transport used to carry troops to different planets, usually only used be commanders The Predator was a strong and had a sleek design that kep it it going for far distances. It is armed with no weapons, but attachable turrets could be used. Can fit a maximum of 8 troopers and a pilot.



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Re: The Predator

Post by CT44 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:26 pm

Maybe add a description? Right now, all I see are Blurry pics and some jummbled pieces.
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Re: The Predator

Post by Legomotion95 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:29 pm

I agree with CT, however, the shape is very nice.
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Re: The Predator

Post by Gerrard on Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:49 pm

I'll get some more up later, I had to use a different camera as my sister took mine while she was gone today.
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Re: The Predator

Post by MilitaMoose on Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:26 pm

Sleek design? Ehh... No.
It looks like a box with random pieces attached to it.
Using more sloped pieces pointing forward would greatly improve it.
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Re: The Predator

Post by Legomotion95 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 9:02 pm

I would say that it looks alot like a lobster.
That's a good thing. It gives the craft character.
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Re: The Predator

Post by Sialboats on Fri Sep 04, 2009 9:07 pm

The problem with this one is that there is no gradual changing of elevation, or no consistent elevation. It goes from plates to brick wall, and that there just doesn't sit well with me Wink . There's effort here - yes. It looks rather nice... but it's a little rough in design.
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Re: The Predator

Post by pdragon27 on Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:20 pm

I'm with Sial. The shape needs to be more gradual. And you need to use less conflicting slopes.
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Re: The Predator

Post by Gerrard on Fri Sep 04, 2009 11:04 pm

I see what you mean, there will be a V2 up.
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Re: The Predator

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Sep 04, 2009 11:50 pm

I have no idea what that is!!

It's like half box, half landscaping...
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