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Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:24 pm



I made all of this in a day. Made with WMM and GIMP.

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Comments deeply appreciated from Brickfilmers (like Gareth, Pizza, SithFilmer, ABL, Rogue..)


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Post by Guest on Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:34 pm

Amazing effects, good animation and great logo and characters. Good job. Wink

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Post by Green Tee on Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:50 pm

Yay! Another great looking film (hopefully series) coming out!
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Post by Tac on Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:52 pm

I commented, happy now? Razz

I like it TB! When's it due? Razz
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Post by Garet6 on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:21 pm

It's nice, although I have a few criticisms! The voices and sound effects are far too sudden and loud from the complete silence in-between. I recommend having some ambience sound effects all the way through. As for the music, and this is just a personal thought, DON'T USE THAT PIECE. 'Requiem whatever' is one of the most cliched and over used pieces of music on the net. Search about, it's not hard to find something better! Even regular Star Wars music would fit it nicely!
The lighting is too gloomy so use some brighter bulbs occasionally (although it is nice to have lighting change depending on the scene), you would benefit from using more low angle shots and the animation could also do with some smoothing out (but that's forgivable as I think you're pretty new Wink ).

On the plus side, that suit looks BAD A$$ and it appears you have a neat little story going on! Keep up the good work, improve where I've pointed out and you could have a seriously good film in the works here!

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Post by -Aki- on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:27 pm

It's a pretty cool trailer, but like Garet said, there are a few problems with it. One thing I have with it is that when the screen says "Drawn into a world of bounty hunters and assassins) then that Mando says "Welcome to a world of assassins and bounty hunters".
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Post by Gerrard on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:30 pm

I can't wait until the full version of this! It looks awesome so far!
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Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:33 pm

Thanks alot Gareth! I have NO music taste, so I had no idea what to choose. Also I'm REALLY unsatisfied with WMM, it crashes like crazy! Mad

Any good programs (free if possible) you'd like to recommend?
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Post by Garet6 on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:36 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Thanks alot Gareth! I have NO music taste, so I had no idea what to choose. Also I'm REALLY unsatisfied with WMM, it crashes like crazy! Mad

Any good programs (free if possible) you'd like to recommend?

Sorry, I'm all into paying for things. You're right, WMM is the scourge of the software world. Mad You could try demos of pay software? They usually last at least 30 days and have all the same functions. Try Corel Video Studio X2 for starters I recommend!
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Post by mazz on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:41 pm

Great movie but be sides what Garet6 said what is there to say. Wink Get the star wars lego game 1 and 2 demo they have alot of sounds that you can use, if you have Age of Empires III it has alot of ambience sound effects.
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Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:42 pm

AoE 3 for the win!!

And I don't get what you mean by "ambiance effects" can I have an example?
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Post by Garet6 on Mon Sep 07, 2009 7:42 pm

mazz wrote:Great movie but be sides what Garet6 said what is there to say. Wink Get the star wars lego game 1 and 2 demo they have alot of sounds that you can use, if you have Age of Empires III it has alot of ambience sound effects.

Wow, if i'd remembered i'd have said that too! Yes TB, what mazz said! Wink

Thunder-blade wrote:AoE 3 for the win!!

And I don't get what you mean by "ambiance effects" can I have an example?

Background noise. The screeching of a parrot in a teeming jungle? The sound of the sea as it crashes against the rocks?
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Post by Gerrard on Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:05 pm

The program I use is IMovie HD. Plus, that;s the only thing I can use, it's alright, but the sound quality on it is terrible.
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Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:14 am

I use a PC. Razz

Btw, I just made the trailer, I didn't take snips of my actual footage to make this. Razz
Also, I plan to make to make the finishing project a little bit smoother (since a lot of people have complained about it being jerky).
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Post by Brandon9 on Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:21 am

Like I said on Flickr, nice! Also I really like the hud design, and the finished Thunder Blade looks awsome. I don't think I could ever GIMP every frame one by one like that Razz BTW what FPS (Frames per secconed) are you running at? Smile Fordo Yo!


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Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:23 am

He's not finished. Razz

His torso is the old one (cleaned it up a little) and I haven't decaled the legs. Razz
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Post by Brandon9 on Tue Sep 08, 2009 1:33 am

Sorry to post the same question, again but, you posted after I was doe edting my post Razz Soooo, what FPS (Frames Per Secconed) are you filming at? 15 FPS is the perfect number fo filming, so if your not already doing so, I say try it. Smile Fordo Yo!
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:13 am

Good idea and action, but the frames are just a bit choppy.

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