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The LAAT Crash (Comic)

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The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Uberlag on Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:06 am

SLIDESHOW (CLICK ME)

Basic storyline:
92nd Legion LAAT that was carrying several troopers to reinforce a base on Tatooine has been shot down by a droid anti-air canon, but as RC 1142 survives the crash many do not. He makes his way to the base that they surprisingly got fairly close to, it has been raided and no signs of life are around, until a Hailfire scout and droid raiding party encounters the lone commando...
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Pandascide on Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:10 am

Sweetness! Absolute Sweetness! Now I am inspired to do something like this! But where...
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Uberlag on Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:11 am

Its times like these living in the deert is actually good for something, I could do a great Tatooine scene from Episode 4 in my backyard.

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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Pandascide on Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:16 am

Ye Well I am in Illinois in a housing COMPLEX, no yard... Sometimes I want to explode Waaa!
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Apr 26, 2008 6:41 am

Where is the text?
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:22 am

WOW that was cool, but I suggest using some kind of "laser" or something *cough*pipe cleaner*cough* to indicate when something/someone is shooting, but other than that, pure AWESOMENESS! I especially like the blown-up and abondoned Turbo Tank, REALLY NICE JOB! Hola Wow! Hola Wow! Blue Arc
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by 80-0 on Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:23 pm

Yes; in my upcoming TFU vignette I will use trans-red and trans-orange cones to stick on the end of the new blasters to make them appear to be shooting. Wink

Looks cool! Basically I'd echo what ABL said!

And what DP said. Where IS the text? :scratch:

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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Bly on Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:57 pm

Wow! Shocked

great storyline! I don't really think that it needs text, you can tell what's happening from the pictures.
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Post by 80-0 on Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:38 pm

commanderbly42 wrote:Wow! Shocked

great storyline! I don't really think that it needs text, you can tell what's happening from the pictures.

Well, it is a great storyline, but some story boxes would help it a bit.

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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Apr 26, 2008 1:58 pm

Did your legos get all sandy? I hope not, I got my tusken raiders all sandy by playing with them in the sand. But wow, those pics were cool!

This one was disturbing though... Razz
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Uberlag on Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:00 pm

Everything got partially sandy, just had to shake it and it was all good.

My adobe photoshop trial ran out, so I cant insert text boxes, which makes me mad.
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:08 pm

Why don't you use MSpaint?
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Uberlag on Sat Apr 26, 2008 4:44 pm

Macs don't have MSPaint
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Wuzzupbob on Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:02 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:This one was disturbing though... Razz

LOL wow, I completely agree
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Shifto Canucki on Sat Apr 26, 2008 5:23 pm

Uberlag wrote:Macs don't have MSPaint

Try Comic Life from plasq. it allows you to lay out actual comic book style panels with speech bubbles etc. It came standard with my wife's iMac but it's only $30 if you need to buy it. They also have a Windows version.

I enjoyed the comic by the way, though I agree it needs some text.

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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Apr 26, 2008 7:02 pm

I dunno, I think text would kinda distract from the storyline, because you would have to read everything before it moves on, instead of focusing on the scene itself. Wink Blue Arc
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Comrade Faie on Sat Apr 26, 2008 8:48 pm

Pretty good... good job of using your surroundings to make a comic! Fordo Yo!

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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Zepher on Sun Apr 27, 2008 3:35 pm

I'm thikning of starting a somewhat serious comic storyline, somewhat (but not exactly) like Grunts and CC-007's comics combined! I've got to get to work soon!
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Re: The LAAT Crash (Comic)

Post by Clonecommando007 on Mon Apr 28, 2008 1:40 pm

Needs text; in bubbles. OK work though.
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