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Droid attack

Post by cadbane123 on Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:18 pm

A bignette using some custom minfigs. The clones are attacking a driod base. LINK.







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Re: Droid attack

Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:48 pm

This is a pretty nice one! I like your use of the jet troopers, however why is it called "Knock knock, whos there, pizza guy"?

EDIT: Glad that you changed th title!


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Re: Droid attack

Post by Funky Cow on Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:05 pm

It's a nice moc but the floor is just a green base plate, add some detail to it and it would look a lot better. Wink
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Re: Droid attack

Post by 80-0 on Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:18 pm

Please, please use a spellchecker on that title. This is publicly viewable you know. Wow this thing looks'oh:

It looks OK; the main door looks pretty well done, though the command centre is a little mundane.

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Post by Gerrard on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:21 am

Indeed, why use a name like that as it has basically nothing to do with the MOC?

The hanger is ok, but the baseplate needs a lot of work.
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Post by 80-0 on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:31 am

I believe he's making a joke in regards to the clones attempting to gain access via ordnance uninvited to the droid compound.

Or some such thing.

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Post by Phazezorz on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:34 am

80-0 wrote:I believe he's making a joke in regards to the clones attempting to gain access via ordnance uninvited to the droid compound.

Or some such thing.

Well, it was done poorly. Especially if you can barely read it...

Overall, moc is....decent. It's just a standard base, nothing real special at all...

EDIT: Applause to the ADMIN/MOD who changed the name of this....

/Applause
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Re: Droid attack

Post by (insert name here) on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:41 am

Okay, who's the meanie abusing their MOD powers?

'cause I want to give you a big thumbs up. Thumbs up



Razz

Your MOC is very plain. I can see plenty of spots where you could have added a lot of greebles.
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Re: Droid attack

Post by Darth Yoda on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:46 am

I changed the name of this for a while, hoping that a guild member such as yourself would be responsible enough to realize that you were using horrible grammar that was making CABG look very bad. But, you went offline so I gave it a simple name. Do this again and you will be banned.


On the Moc side... I really think you should compare your guild apps and this together. This needs to be scrapped and redone. Sorry to tell you this.
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Re: Droid attack

Post by cadbane123 on Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:17 am

80-0 wrote:Please, please use a spellchecker on that title. This is publicly viewable you know. Wow this thing looks'oh:

It looks OK; the main door looks pretty well done, though the command centre is a little mundane.
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I copied the name from Flickr, I usually pay no attention to the name.

I changed the name of this for a while, hoping that a guild member such as yourself would be responsible enough to realize that you were using horrible grammar that was making CABG look very bad. But, you went offline so I gave it a simple name. Do this again and you will be banned.


On the Moc side... I really think you should compare your guild apps and this together. This needs to be scrapped and redone. Sorry to tell you this.
I have scrapped it. If I cared to rebuild it I would give it more detail/greebles.
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Re: Droid attack

Post by wrecks on Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:19 am

This really isn't a very good MOC, sorry to say. You do have too good parts though, the first being what looks like a sliding blast door, I see some gear lines across the top, does work? The other good thing is the use of those tall slanting walls, which would have looked ten times better if there were some greebles in the gap between them. The rest is pretty poor, and extremely plain, maybe try some SNOT and defenitly some greebles.
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Re: Droid attack

Post by Guest on Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:28 am

I like the entrance, the rest, not so much. Embarassed

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Re: Droid attack

Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon Sep 14, 2009 12:39 am

Sorry about this but besides the blast doors, I don't find this MOC that great. Sad
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Re: Droid attack

Post by ninjaspud on Sat Sep 19, 2009 3:53 am

Sweet Wink it looks very detailed espeacially the base Razz Camo

Please edit your post(s) and use proper spelling, grammar, spacing, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN --R
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Re: Droid attack

Post by Sialboats on Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:44 am

Have I commented on this...

No, I haven't.

Very well then: It's a bad base on a baseplate. The ground outside of the complex isn't textured and varied enough, the base itself, while the window elements and door elements are okay, isn't too substantial, and the minifigures make the scene feel cluttered. This is not quality work, and what little you did just barely keeps me from branding this rubbish Waaa! .
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Re: Droid attack

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:22 pm

The little bunker area and door are pretty good in my opinion. But the ground lacks any real detail. If you added some, this would be a decent MOC. Wink Blue Arc
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