[WIP] Crimson Thunder

I took apart my Warbird and my Sparrow to make this. Stay posted for updates!

It looks good so far TB. Nice color selection as well.

I would have to agree, I think it looks great so far. Can't wait until you complete it!

I like the way you wrap everything around to fit the cockpit. You should build a bunch of different armors and just attach that to which ever one you want to use. That would be awesome!

Looking pretty good, with all the SNOT work. Now you just need more controls inside the cockpit...

How did I know this was a MOC by Teebs when I saw the title?


Look really good so far, loving the angels.

Looks good so far around the cockpit. I hope you'll be making a body soon!

I have about 80% of it done. I need some ideas for the back. Will post pics soon.

EDIT: Pics!!

So far, it looks great, the only downside is that you mixed dark grey and bley.

Front has an excellent shap to it. The thin wings seem out of place personally.

The wings look meh. Change them.

The front is really cool but the back...Not so much. The wings are kinda blocky.

For crying out loud! CCX. He said he's not done with the back and needs some ideas!

Now that thats over with, I slightly agree on the wings. Just give them a slight tilt down and you've got my say.

The body is looking good TB, but the wings could use some work. Maybe add some slopes to the bottom of the wings, and some guns.

From the look of the cockpit, it would look like a big transport or shuttle. So I think that the body should be bigger and be something like a shuttle which can be able to hold something. Also, the wings are okay for a start but you should enlarge the length of it way more.

Good job so far, keep it up!

It needs to be longer... much longer. Don't make it ugly and pudgy, try moving the wings back and making it longer.

Everything looks great! But I think the wings are very bland, and the whole thing might turn out a little stubby, so I agree with making it longer and pushing the wings back.

1 Million Watts Of Power wrote:For crying out loud! CCX. He said he's not done with the back and needs some ideas!

Now that thats over with, I slightly agree on the wings. Just give them a slight tilt down and you've got my say.

Yes I read that! Gosh, you say it as if I'm not even giving feedback.

I actually disagree with the wings being out of place. In my opinion, it gives the ship what I'm calling the 'Thunder-blade'-style wings, as it's very reminiscent of his previous ships, like the SARGE, Cayman and Warbird.

Engine intakes are also looking pretty sweet.

Put a minigun under the wing.

Tac wrote:Put a minigun under the wing.

I put one on before I even looked at your comment.

And to others, I have V1 finished, I'll post it tomorrow (or today in your timezone, I'm up late)

The wings are bulked up and detailed. And I decided not to make it longer (that's what's SHE and Dy said).

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