Customizers and Builders Guild
Welcome to the Customizers And Builders Guild Forums, remodeled from the Clone Army Builders Guild!
You are welcome to browse as a Guest, but we invite
you to take advantage of more abilities by registering
for our website, and applying to the Guild later on.

321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

View previous topic View next topic Go down

321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:37 pm

I built this a little while ago. Wink
C&C Welcome!

Updated!


Front!


Back!


Last edited by Anomanzor on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:42 pm; edited 2 times in total
avatar
RubbahBand
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 21
Location : Haunting CABG


http://www.flickr.com/photos/37639510@N08

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:55 pm

Its pretty good overall, but I think it would look better if you made the bottom of the cannon a bit wider. (Like a cone) Wink
avatar
Troopa Daisy
Halo Kitty
Halo Kitty

Age : 21
Location : Vancouver, BC Canada. GO CANUCKS GO!


http://www.flickr.com/photos/43597477@N02/

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by CommanderNexu on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:01 pm

I like how you did the steering/controls. Good job!
avatar
CommanderNexu
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Age : 21
Location : On Mandalore


Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by (insert name here) on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:02 pm

Hmm...I like what you're going for, but I think the base needs to be wider. And the barrel of the cannon is too square for my tastes.
avatar
(insert name here)
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : (insert location here)


http://www.flickr.com/photos/41887982@N04/

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:02 pm

Troopa wrote:Its pretty good overall, but I think it would look better if you made the bottom of the cannon a bit wider. (Like a cone) Wink

I'm not really sure what you mean by "cone". Wink
avatar
RubbahBand
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 21
Location : Haunting CABG


http://www.flickr.com/photos/37639510@N08

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon

Post by Cyrus on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:16 pm

A good MOC, But I agree with INH. Is it a hover cannon?
avatar
Cyrus
Guild Member
Guild Member

Location : In a barrel of toxic waste


Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:23 pm

Pyro Hawk wrote:A good MOC, But I agree with INH. Is it a hover cannon?

Yes it is partial hover cannon but it moves slowly. This is why I named it a tactical cannon:

1: It can hover but only slowly.
2: The cannon can make a 90 degree turn towards the left and fire.
3: The cannon can move downwards 45 degrees and fire over a cliff.

Well I hope that gives it a bit more background. Smile
A update shall be coming soon. <.< >.>
avatar
RubbahBand
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 21
Location : Haunting CABG


http://www.flickr.com/photos/37639510@N08

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by Gerrard on Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:03 pm

Looks a little plain and boring. It's a good idea, but try going for something wider and thicker.
avatar
Gerrard
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 22
Location : Somewhere to the left of the Death Star


http://www.youtube.com/ThirdAgeFilm

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:39 pm

Eh it's OK. It looks very unbalanced.
avatar
Thunder-blade
Thunder-Sharpie
Thunder-Sharpie

Age : 22
Location : A galaxy far, far away...


http://mocpages.com/home.php/15131

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by Rook on Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:22 pm

Interesting needs refinement and minifigure.

________________________________________________________________

Signature by RΟΟK, on Flickr
avatar
Rook
The Doctor
The Doctor

Location : Ontario


http://www.flickr.com/photos/11205069@N06/

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by legorevolution on Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:50 pm

I like the use of snot, but would like to see a minifig in it. I also feel that the barrel of the cannon should be a little longer or more menacing on the end. Smile
avatar
legorevolution
VIP Former Staff
VIP Former Staff

Location : Arizona


http://www.bricklink.com/store.asp?p=legorevolution

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by MasterBrettKenobi on Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:26 pm

I think you did a great job on it. But I have to go with the others, I think you should reconsider to change it.
avatar
MasterBrettKenobi
Non-Guild Member
Non-Guild Member

Location : Planet Geonosis


Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by Rook on Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:41 pm

Here are my recommendations to add detail to this MOC.

1. Slope backrest and finish off opening with plate or clip with gun or antenna
2. Add pivot to allow gun to move up and down

3. Widen base for more stability
4. Add a line of Republic red



P.S. Love the basic design and concept the SNOT technique is good. Now just make it great. Wink


Fixed grammar, list numbering and general order of post for you. An ADMIN really ought to be a better poster. -TJN

________________________________________________________________

Signature by RΟΟK, on Flickr
avatar
Rook
The Doctor
The Doctor

Location : Ontario


http://www.flickr.com/photos/11205069@N06/

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by ninjaspud on Fri Sep 25, 2009 12:52 am

Nice job man! Smile small but cool Razz Marine

Please edit your post(s) and use proper spelling, grammar, spacing, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN --R
avatar
ninjaspud


Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by RubbahBand on Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:08 am

Wow now I regret wrecking it. Sad
Well the pictures are pretty much the instructions... and I might as well rebuild it a bit. Wink
Also the gun actually did move up and down. Smile
avatar
RubbahBand
Guild Member
Guild Member

Age : 21
Location : Haunting CABG


http://www.flickr.com/photos/37639510@N08

Back to top Go down

Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum