321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*
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321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*
I built this a little while ago.
C&C Welcome!
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C&C Welcome!
Updated!
Front!
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Last edited by Anomanzor on Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:42 pm; edited 2 times in total
Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon
Its pretty good overall, but I think it would look better if you made the bottom of the cannon a bit wider. (Like a cone)
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I like how you did the steering/controls. Good job!
CommanderNexu- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 27
Location : On Mandalore
Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*
Hmm...I like what you're going for, but I think the base needs to be wider. And the barrel of the cannon is too square for my tastes.
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Troopa wrote:Its pretty good overall, but I think it would look better if you made the bottom of the cannon a bit wider. (Like a cone)
I'm not really sure what you mean by "cone".
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A good MOC, But I agree with INH. Is it a hover cannon?
Cyrus- Guild Member
- Location : In a barrel of toxic waste
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Pyro Hawk wrote:A good MOC, But I agree with INH. Is it a hover cannon?
Yes it is partial hover cannon but it moves slowly. This is why I named it a tactical cannon:
1: It can hover but only slowly.
2: The cannon can make a 90 degree turn towards the left and fire.
3: The cannon can move downwards 45 degrees and fire over a cliff.
Well I hope that gives it a bit more background.
A update shall be coming soon. <.< >.>
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Looks a little plain and boring. It's a good idea, but try going for something wider and thicker.
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I like the use of snot, but would like to see a minifig in it. I also feel that the barrel of the cannon should be a little longer or more menacing on the end.
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I think you did a great job on it. But I have to go with the others, I think you should reconsider to change it.
MasterBrettKenobi- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Planet Geonosis
Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*
Here are my recommendations to add detail to this MOC.
1. Slope backrest and finish off opening with plate or clip with gun or antenna
2. Add pivot to allow gun to move up and down
3. Widen base for more stability
4. Add a line of Republic red
P.S. Love the basic design and concept the SNOT technique is good. Now just make it great.
Fixed grammar, list numbering and general order of post for you. An ADMIN really ought to be a better poster. -TJN
1. Slope backrest and finish off opening with plate or clip with gun or antenna
2. Add pivot to allow gun to move up and down
3. Widen base for more stability
4. Add a line of Republic red
P.S. Love the basic design and concept the SNOT technique is good. Now just make it great.
Fixed grammar, list numbering and general order of post for you. An ADMIN really ought to be a better poster. -TJN
Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*
Nice job man! small but cool
Please edit your post(s) and use proper spelling, grammar, spacing, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN --R
Please edit your post(s) and use proper spelling, grammar, spacing, capitalization, & punctuation. Thanks. ADMIN --R
ninjaspud
Re: 321st Legion Tactical Cannon *Updated*
Wow now I regret wrecking it.
Well the pictures are pretty much the instructions... and I might as well rebuild it a bit.
Also the gun actually did move up and down.
Well the pictures are pretty much the instructions... and I might as well rebuild it a bit.
Also the gun actually did move up and down.
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