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Indiana Jones Deleted Scene

Post by VenatorClassCruiser on Tue Sep 22, 2009 5:45 am

A funny idea that I came up with for the Last Crusade: What if the Nazis were still in Venice while the Brotherhood of the Cruciform Sword were chasing Indy and Elsa about?

Overview.

Without figs, not including boats.

Indy. This is probably my favorite shot.

The Brotherhood.

Henry: "Junior?!"
Guard: "Shut up."

A nice canal-side park.

Hotel Entrance.

Suite Balcony

Rooftop planter box

Hotel Lobby.
I was greatly inspired by the LIJ video game, obviously the first level of Last Crusade.
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Re: Indiana Jones Deleted Scene

Post by captain brick on Tue Sep 22, 2009 7:01 am

One word. Awesome! I like the bit where Henry says, "Junior?" and then the guard tells him to shut up.

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Post by Luke on Tue Sep 22, 2009 8:16 am

It's good, but it could use some work on the water and colours. You've made this quite big when it could of been smaller if you were only focusing on the humour.
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Post by Sialboats on Tue Sep 22, 2009 9:21 am

In general, this seems very sloppy and uncoordinated. There are too many conflicting plates, too many pieces put about where they shouldn't be, a lot of ragged edges, not enough SNOT/Tiles, and color issues.

This is something I'd expect from a seven-nine year old.

I'm not impressed.
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Re: Indiana Jones Deleted Scene

Post by Legomania313 on Tue Sep 22, 2009 11:03 am

Very Good, the land could have a bit more detail but the water's great
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Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Sep 22, 2009 12:10 pm

The water is very vomit-inducing, but the building is pretty awesome. I like the alternate storyline, too. Laughing
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Tue Sep 22, 2009 11:28 pm

Good job on the building and the story! The water could be better though. Wink
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Post by Knight on Wed Sep 23, 2009 12:07 am

Nice moc. The building is nice, and the story is a bonus.
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