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Episode 21: Tunnels

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Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Zepher on Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:29 am

Season 1
Episode 21
Tunnels


I think, due to my long pause, that I owe you guys two episodes this weekend. Enjoy the first! I will get out the second on Wed. at the latest. Not a great episode, but I like it.









































Please comment!


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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:32 am

Pretty good effects on the pics. I'm somewhat confused on the story though. Wink Smile


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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Zepher on Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:36 am

That's probaly becuase it's episode 21. Try to reread the rest of the episodes of the series, and if you're still confused, then you're like everyone else on this site. Razz Apparently I'm bad at story-telling.
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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:47 am

Yes, after reading the previous ones I understood it a bit more. Still somewhat confused though with the jumping here and there. Wink Smile
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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Green Tee on Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:02 pm

I liked almost everything. The lightsaber was too thin though, and in frame 15 you spelled 'you' 'yoiu'.
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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Zepher on Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:24 pm

CommanderKill wrote:I liked almost everything. The lightsaber was too thin though, and in frame 15 you spelled 'you' 'yoiu'.

Both correct, but it was the first time that I'd done the lightsaber for myself, so I'm proud that I finally handled it!

Could I get more comments?
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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by PhiMa on Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:48 pm

GIMP'ing's been done quite nicely, I especially like that 'blackout' effect at the end of the flashback.

I'm still following the story alright, and the sets are non-colourful, so s'all good right now.
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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by Green Tee on Tue Oct 20, 2009 9:32 pm

I'm glad you got the lightsaber done yourself! I'm following the story pretty well. I can't wait for Jinja(no offense to you Zeph, your comics are good) to come and rips this to shred. That always puts a good laugh in my day. Razz The fire was pretty well done though.
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Re: Episode 21: Tunnels

Post by commander shard on Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:52 pm

I really liked the story line and the plot. But the last four slides it got foggy (i'm assuming thats supposed to be there) but overall great job! Wow this thing looks

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