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The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

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The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Bizzle on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:05 pm

Well this is the 4th installment of the comic which started out rather bad. I took alot longer on this one to make sure the spelling was correct and that the dialog was better then prior comics. The lighting is crap. The blurryness of some people was done on purpose.



























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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:07 pm

Here's a tip on editing... always make it dark BEFORE you do the speech bubbles. Razz
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Bizzle on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:09 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Here's a tip on editing... always make it dark BEFORE you do the speech bubbles. Razz
I did thats the funny thing. Any comments on stuff other then on my editing?

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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by PhiMa on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:10 pm

Getting better..style's reminding me a little of Sial.... Sad

Also, it's Rendez-vous.
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Rook on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:11 pm

Sad Can't see much in the pictures. I likes to see my Lego. Sad

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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:14 pm

Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling! Wink Razz
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Bizzle on Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:17 pm

Phi- If you mean by all the tan I understand. Thats the color I have the most of therefore it is going to see alot of "screen time". Also the next series should it last that long will be in a more industrial area so more grays ect.

Well thats not how my mom and my spell checker told me it was spelled. D@mn my spell checker to hell.


Rook- Well as I intended it to be shot at night it would be kinda hard to have it at night while all the lego is lit up.


Troopa- I have no sad face's. Sad

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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Jens on Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:07 pm

The floor is still too plain and straight.


Oh and change those rebel troopers, make some original. Wink
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Bizzle on Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:19 pm

Ok thanks. I am thinking of changing the arms and maybe the legs. I also want to give them different helmets but I don't have the ones I want.

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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Alpha on Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:18 am

Change all the rebel figures, it looks like the Alliance is fighting the Republic.

Anyways, it was a bit too dark, the text didn't really fit inside the bubbles, and the supernova was waay too small. Good job, though. Wink

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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Man on fire on Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:27 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling! Wink Razz
Troopa Daisy, I think he's stoned. I think it's a good comic. Needs a little light improvement though.
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Troopa Daisy on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:37 am

Man on fire wrote:
Troopa Daisy wrote:Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling! Wink Razz
Troopa Daisy, I think he's stoned. I think it's a good comic. Needs a little light improvement though.

I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean by he's stoned. Wink
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Man on fire on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:58 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:
Man on fire wrote:
Troopa Daisy wrote:Yes, you're comics are getting better. What's up with the forth pic though? The guy on the stretcher's smiling! Wink Razz
Troopa Daisy, I think he's stoned. I think it's a good comic. Needs a little light improvement though.

I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean by he's stoned. Wink
I mean he's drugged, under the influence, stoned.
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Gerrard on Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:10 am

In simple words: He's drunk.

Daisy, are you really 13? Razz
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Troopa Daisy on Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:19 am

Yes, I am Gerrard. My birthday will be next Friday (14). Wink Smile
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by Bizzle on Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:33 am

Alpha- Thas where I have a problem. I want to change the figs but I don't have any torsos that I could really use. Also wouldn't it be odd to change then in the middle of a comic series?


Troopa- I too don't think you are 13...


Edit: I flipped the rebel torsos around so they are just tan. And got rid of the goggles. I also switched out the rebel leaders Saras torso with that of at-st pilot. Those are all of the changes I am going to make for now. You will rarely see the "rebel" troopers it will mostly be the clones and the rebel leaders. So just put up with it the way it is for the next 10 or so installments the next series will be better I promise.... So if you could from now on keep the comments off of the mini figs that would be awesome.

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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by oandtstudios on Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:15 am

You could always say that they have recieved a shipment of new armour. Wink

Also, you comics are definately getting better. I like this one, but theres something missing.....
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by PhiMa on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:49 pm

Gerrard wrote:In simple words: He's drunk.

Daisy, are you really 13? Razz

Lolno.

Stoned means you're under an influence of any drug, but not alcohol. Has nothing to do with being drunk. You may have been thinking of hammered.
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:54 pm

Aaaactually, 'stoned' generally refers to being under the influence of cannabis/marijuana specifically.

Oh, and the comic was so-so.
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Re: The 82nd Legion Holo Records: #4 This Is War

Post by commander shard on Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:58 pm

really good battle scenes and good storyline but it was dark the whole way through which made it kind of dull but aside from the darkness it was really good Wow this thing looks


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