Hell on Felucia

On Felucia a clone patrol ran into a squad of battle droids and a fight broke out. During the fight a grenade's explosion started the area on fire and in a few minutes the whole battle field was in flames. The droids being imune to the fire kept on fighting but the clones tried desperatly to escape to the river. On a final atempt, the remaining clones made a despret charge at the droids. Will they make it or will they be lost in the fire or killed by the droids?

Lemme guess! The droids win, but Fox has to abandon his troops because George Lucas already had Order 66 planned out.

Once again, great MOC. But don't droids melt, cause they're metal?

Its good, but it could be better.

To be honest this isn't that great a felucia.

CommanderKill wrote: But don't droids melt, cause they're metal?

Or they blow up. But they aren't woried about that.

This is a very nice battle scene, well done on it. Now this is what I call hell, well It has fire so generally that depicts hell.

This looks like, to be honest, a beginner's Felucia.

Now don't get too down on that, because I can honestly say that if I were to attempt Felucia right now it would probably look like this.

The idea is good, and I like the fact that it's endowed with especial ordnance. What I'd recommend to improve it is:

Ignore cloneofthe501st and CloneCommandoXion, who apparently don't understand the definition of constructive critiscism.

Add some larger, newer, more colorful (not so much translucent, sometimes solid colors work better) bricks into it.

Make more brick-built flowers! The 'flower' thing you have off to a corner looks very sad. It's VERY blocky for a flower. I'd use some more, as aforesaid, special bricks to create the look of a fantastic, mysterious flower.

Looks like someone had a small shopping spree on TLAS.
I hate to say, but that's almost too colorful for Felucia.
Don't mix Ep. II clones with CW, it doesn't look so good.
Overall, reiver aren't that blue, and I wish our grass was that green. It needs some serious work. If there's fire, make some burnt plants.

I think that 80-0 took the spotlight with his post up there.

But yes, everything is just too small, if you look at the real Felucia, there are the big plants and solid colors are also just as important. If you are looking for a Felucia, look at LegoRev's. Green plants are also on the ground as well, not just everything is translucent or bright.

I really like this vignette, the details and the color of felucia really stand out, also I like the river between the factions, it provides clear seperation. Good work!

I'm missing Felucia's enormous flowers.

It's a good first shot at Felucia, you captured the color pretty good methinks. I actually like the mixing of the types of Phase I Clones, I was waiting for someone to do that, good work.

where did u get the guns?

Wuzzup Singapore! Ah please read the rules regarding bumping old topics. - R