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[WIP] Crimson Thunder

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[WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 21, 2009 10:05 pm



I took apart my Warbird and my Sparrow to make this. Stay posted for updates!
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Knight on Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:22 pm

It looks good so far TB. Nice color selection as well.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by CloneCommanderChaz on Sat Nov 21, 2009 11:41 pm

I would have to agree, I think it looks great so far. Can't wait until you complete it!
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by SeargentKano on Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:43 am

I like the way you wrap everything around to fit the cockpit. You should build a bunch of different armors and just attach that to which ever one you want to use. That would be awesome!
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Axel on Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:52 am

Looking pretty good, with all the SNOT work. Now you just need more controls inside the cockpit...
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Jens on Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:34 am

How did I know this was a MOC by Teebs when I saw the title? Razz


Look really good so far, loving the angels.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:23 pm

Looks good so far around the cockpit. I hope you'll be making a body soon! Smile Razz
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Nov 22, 2009 8:32 pm

I have about 80% of it done. I need some ideas for the back. Will post pics soon.

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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Astor on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:01 pm

So far, it looks great, the only downside is that you mixed dark grey and bley.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Halen on Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:30 pm

Front has an excellent shap to it. The thin wings seem out of place personally.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Heady on Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:22 pm

The wings look meh. Change them.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sun Nov 22, 2009 10:29 pm

The front is really cool but the back...Not so much. The wings are kinda blocky. Wink
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:25 pm

For crying out loud! CCX. He said he's not done with the back and needs some ideas! Mad Laughing

Now that thats over with, I slightly agree on the wings. Just give them a slight tilt down and you've got my say.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Knight on Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:50 pm

The body is looking good TB, but the wings could use some work. Maybe add some slopes to the bottom of the wings, and some guns.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon Nov 23, 2009 1:30 am

From the look of the cockpit, it would look like a big transport or shuttle. So I think that the body should be bigger and be something like a shuttle which can be able to hold something. Also, the wings are okay for a start but you should enlarge the length of it way more. Wink Smile

Good job so far, keep it up! Smile
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Darth Yoda on Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:03 am

It needs to be longer... much longer. Don't make it ugly and pudgy, try moving the wings back and making it longer.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by SeargentKano on Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:10 am

Everything looks great! But I think the wings are very bland, and the whole thing might turn out a little stubby, so I agree with making it longer and pushing the wings back.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Mon Nov 23, 2009 4:04 am

1 Million Watts Of Power wrote:For crying out loud! CCX. He said he's not done with the back and needs some ideas! Mad Laughing

Now that thats over with, I slightly agree on the wings. Just give them a slight tilt down and you've got my say.

Yes I read that! Gosh, you say it as if I'm not even giving feedback. Kabam!
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Axel on Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:01 am

I actually disagree with the wings being out of place. In my opinion, it gives the ship what I'm calling the 'Thunder-blade'-style wings, as it's very reminiscent of his previous ships, like the SARGE, Cayman and Warbird.

Engine intakes are also looking pretty sweet.
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Tac on Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:23 am

Put a minigun under the wing. Wink
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Nov 23, 2009 9:54 am

Tac wrote:Put a minigun under the wing. Wink

I put one on before I even looked at your comment. Hola Wow!

And to others, I have V1 finished, I'll post it tomorrow (or today in your timezone, I'm up late)

The wings are bulked up and detailed. And I decided not to make it longer (that's what's SHE and Dy said).
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Re: [WIP] Crimson Thunder

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:25 pm

Double Post/Update!!

Pics posted!!

CLICKY!

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CLICKY!

And 'locked!
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