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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:57 am

An interceptor for my faction. It has twin laser guns closely relating the L-s9.3 laser guns on the Tie/In, and a pair of specially designed ion guns made for freezing the systems of enemy fighters. Though the ion guns could also be used on other things like turret emplacements, ground vehicles, and artillery pieces, but it tended to not be very effective.







And do not call it a.......d*ck, I already blocked someone on flickr. Sad
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Post by RubbahBand on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:22 am

Why would we think it's a (Fill In The Blank)?
It's actually quite decent on the SNOT but a few mixed grays here and there.
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Post by Caboose on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:27 am

Overall all I think it is a very decent MOC. I like the design. You should make the guns better or more noticible.
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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:35 am

Why would we think it's a (Fill In The Blank)?
It's actually quite decent on the SNOT but a few mixed grays here and there.
Unfortunately I completely ran out of bluish gray inverted slopes for the second wing. Well I had to block Karol Rabalski loves lego star wars for saying and I quote (WARNING) penis.
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Post by Gerrard on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:57 am

Too much gray mixing, and not a lot of detail, but the snot is alright, not bad overall.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by PhiMa on Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:02 pm

Hey, it's a Di - Oh snap. Razz

(Kidding of course)

Well, it's got some nice snot work, and it's overall pretty smooth, but I didn't like how the red slopes on the sides 'stood' out and the mixing of bleys. Otherwise, It's great.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Cyrus on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:09 pm

Wow, this thing is pretty good but you know what would be better if you replaced the red with light gray. Wink
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Hazard with a Glove on Tue Nov 24, 2009 1:35 pm

I had no other colors then red to make it that long, but I plan on making a brick link order to make it a better color. I'll update it whenever that happens.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Green Tee on Wed Nov 25, 2009 7:42 pm

Dude, that looks like a duck.
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This is actually a really neat ship. I think the red on the handle is actually the right color.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Awesome-o-saurus on Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:42 pm

Pretty ax-like. Though that pilot is in for some G-force if he wants to spin around in that...
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Wed Nov 25, 2009 8:45 pm

Hazard with a Glove wrote:And do not call it a.......d*ck, I already blocked someone on flickr. Sad
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...Giving new meaning to the phrase 'cock-blocked'?

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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Green Tee on Wed Nov 25, 2009 9:31 pm

I'm guessing you mean chop-blocked?
Get it? Because it's an ax? Haha he he... ehhh.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Knight on Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:27 pm

It is a nice fighter, and the snot is good. As others have said the red needs to go, and the wings look like the bat wing. Overall great job.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by 80-0 on Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:51 pm

The shape is cool; the nose is a tad too long in my opinion. Shortening it would give it a more realistic design.

However, I think it'd look cool either as all red (i.e. making the "ax blade"/wings red) or as all grey (making the nose grey).

Guys, is it really fair to blame people for mixing greys? Not all of them can make brick orders, *points at several people*, but it's not like they're doing it on purpose. Yes, it decreases the quality of the MOC. However, the idea and the shape are two points out of three that this MOC covers as far as I'm concerned.

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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Commander Lukas on Thu Nov 26, 2009 12:09 am

80-0 wrote:Guys, is it really fair to blame people for mixing greys? Not all of them can make brick orders, *points at several people*, but it's not like they're doing it on purpose. Yes, it decreases the quality of the MOC. However, the idea and the shape are two points out of three that this MOC covers as far as I'm concerned.

Actually 80-o I think mixing greys increases the creative options of the MOCer. With grebbles, next time you look under the hood of a car, note that all the parts aren't the same color/shade. Or it can look like the MOC has goten some "use." Such as the feet of a walker, or the cannons of a tank.

To the MOC: too long. In low altitude attacks, this is gonna be real slow to turn to engage a flanker. The G-forces would be too strong and the poilt most likely will black out. Look at it this way which is faster to turn a corner; a bus, or a VW Beatle? Make it sorter. And make the guns stand out a tad more. Other then that it's a well-made starfighter.
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Troopa Daisy on Thu Nov 26, 2009 11:43 pm

I like the middle design but I'm not to sure if I really like the wings. It looks a bit.........awkward. Other than that, it's great! Smile
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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Hunter of Droids on Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:35 pm

Overall, I think it is a good build. I am not the best at judging anything really.


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Re: Ax-wing

Post by 80-0 on Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:23 pm

Commander Lukas wrote:
80-0 wrote:Guys, is it really fair to blame people for mixing greys? Not all of them can make brick orders, *points at several people*, but it's not like they're doing it on purpose. Yes, it decreases the quality of the MOC. However, the idea and the shape are two points out of three that this MOC covers as far as I'm concerned.

Actually 80-o I think mixing greys increases the creative options of the MOCer. With grebbles, next time you look under the hood of a car, note that all the parts aren't the same color/shade. Or it can look like the MOC has goten some "use." Such as the feet of a walker, or the cannons of a tank.

To the MOC: too long. In low altitude attacks, this is gonna be real slow to turn to engage a flanker. The G-forces would be too strong and the poilt most likely will black out. Look at it this way which is faster to turn a corner; a bus, or a VW Beatle? Make it sorter. And make the guns stand out a tad more. Other then that it's a well-made starfighter.

Now wait just a minute: I wasn't discounting ALL uses of old/new greys. Of course they're good at changing the look of things: for example, rocks on a mountain. Some will probably be weathered with mud and whatnot, so the alternation in colors would no doubt help that.

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Re: Ax-wing

Post by Commander Mongoose on Fri Nov 27, 2009 7:10 pm

I really like this! Great Moc! The fronts a little long though.
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Re:Ax-wing

Post by shadowfixer on Fri Nov 27, 2009 11:01 pm

I really think its pretty cool.
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