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80th legion starfighter

Post by Knight on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:22 pm

Just a 45 minute moc, and a starfighter for my legion.











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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by Alpha on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:25 pm

The front of the starfighter needs to be straightened out, and you should use less slopes near the cockpit.

Not bad, though.

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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by Knight on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:27 pm

Alpha wrote:The front of the starfighter needs to be straightened out, and you should use less slopes near the cockpit.

Not bad, though.

Thanks alpha, this was a really differant build than my other ships, so I thought it came out pretty well.
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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by Cyrus on Sun Nov 29, 2009 9:57 pm

It's pretty good, but it shouldn't have all those slopes leading to the engine. Man you need a flickr account so it's easier to comment on stuff like this! Wink
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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by Darth Dan on Tue Dec 01, 2009 12:50 am

Hey,looks nice Smile Keep up the good work Thumbs up
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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by Gerrard on Tue Dec 01, 2009 1:07 am

Not bad, though there are too many "big" pieces, but then again it is just my opinion. Razz
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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by shadowtrooper5 on Tue Dec 01, 2009 3:57 am

very good. looks more like a speeder though. good desighn.

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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by ghosttrooper on Tue Dec 01, 2009 9:26 pm

its ok. but you did build it in only 45 minutes so i'll cut you some slack. you should try to get rid of those gray pieces and replace them with white ones
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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by (insert name here) on Tue Dec 01, 2009 9:57 pm

Looks more like a closed speeder than a starfighter to me. But it's pretty good.
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Re: 80th legion starfighter

Post by Troopa Daisy on Tue Dec 01, 2009 11:38 pm

I like the use of the combination of white and orange. The craft looks more like a heavy speeder than a fighter to me though. Wink Smile
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awsome

Post by republic731 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:37 am

its awsome eye popping Shocked

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