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V2 Second Hover-Car

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Post by Zepher Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:57 pm

Revised thanks to Tac! I like it a whole lot better now, so thanks buddy! ALSO GIVE NAME SUGGESTIONS IF YOU LIKE!

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(The pilot prides himself with the fact that it looks like a face from the sky.)

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First one: http://www.flickr.com/photos/24991648@N05/sets/72157622614874096/

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Post by RubbahBand Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:58 pm

A bit blocky on the sides but I'm loving the colors.
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Post by Commander Lukas Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:58 pm

Nice job Zeph. I like the red-white colors and the tail fin. A little too boxy though.
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Post by Cyrus Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:22 pm

Wow, one of the best moc I've seen from you! Ever.
@Commander Lukas, how is it boxy, it's full of slopes!
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Post by Commander Lukas Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:28 pm

Pyro Hawk wrote:Wow, one of the best moc I've seen from you! Ever.
@Commander Lukas, how is it boxy, it's full of slopes!

Yes, but notice if you will, the're boxing slopes.
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Post by CloneCommandoXion Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:02 pm

I think the problem is that it has no real 'shape' to it. Otherwise it's a nice build.
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Post by Gerrard Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:17 pm

CloneCommandoXion wrote:I think the problem is that it has no real 'shape' to it. Otherwise it's a nice build.

QFT

The front is a bit too boxy and needs a rounded shape to it. Otherwise, pretty good!
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Post by Troopa Daisy Thu Nov 19, 2009 11:25 pm

It needs to be rounded a bit more, other than that, it's a very nice MOC! Wink Smile
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Post by CloneCommandoXion Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:07 am

Gerrard wrote:
CloneCommandoXion wrote:I think the problem is that it has no real 'shape' to it. Otherwise it's a nice build.

QFT

The front is a bit too boxy and needs a rounded shape to it. Otherwise, pretty good!

Not to sound noobish, but what does QFT mean?
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Post by Knight Fri Nov 20, 2009 12:08 am

The shape needs some work, but other than that it is a nice build.
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Post by Gerrard Fri Nov 20, 2009 1:08 am

QFT means quoted for truth. Wink
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Post by Zepher Mon Nov 23, 2009 3:28 am

What parts need to e unlockified? Anyone want to download it and circle the parts you think i need to work on, and then post it here again?
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Post by Tac Mon Nov 23, 2009 7:38 am

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It needs to be smoother with nice transactions. Wink

1: Add one of those 'half' slopes here to smoothen it out.

2: Too blocky IMO, maybe change it to a small slope that joins to the end fin.

3: Although it's a NPU, I think some slopes may look better, but I'm not sure... Wink

4: Get rid of this gap, maybe change the 1x1 tile to a neckbracket then put a tile or a gun down there?

Oh, change the huge 1x8 tiles at the front, the back bit should be a slope (Maybe with a 1x1 tile on it) so it links to the white one behind it. The rest of the studs you can do what you want with, maybe put a smaller tile down in front of the slope. Wink

Edit: I'm not a huge fan of the semi dome thing in front of the cockpit, maybe some slopes will look better. Wink
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Post by Zepher Sat Nov 28, 2009 1:24 am

Thanks Tac, I'm reworking it!
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Post by Zepher Sun Nov 29, 2009 1:48 am

Revised thanks to Tac! I like it a whole lot better now, so thanks buddy!

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Post by SeargentKano Sun Nov 29, 2009 2:41 am

It looks great now! There is still a little space between the front side and the front, but it is still sweet! Luke Skywalker wished he had a hover car as cool as yours. Razz
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Post by Gerrard Sun Nov 29, 2009 4:35 am

A lot better Zeph. It's good that your rounded it a bit more, not perfect, but still a good V2. Wink
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Post by PhiMa Sun Nov 29, 2009 1:32 pm

Mhmm, much better, I actually quite like the dk. blue/dk. red mixing. Only improvement I think, is that the dk. red tiles on the sides 'stand' out'. It makes it look really odd for some reason.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Sun Nov 29, 2009 4:28 pm

Yes, it does look a lot better. I actually quite like the colour combo of white, blue, and red. Smile
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Post by Knight Sun Nov 29, 2009 8:02 pm

A lot better. It looks smoother and less blocky. I am also starting to like the color combo as well.
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Post by Hunter of Droids Mon Nov 30, 2009 1:08 am

like the color combo. I think it looks like a senate vehicle or something that would belong on a capital planet

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