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Post by Knight on Sat Dec 05, 2009 6:27 pm

Ok so I redid the whole thing, and I thinks it came out a lot better. I got rid of the spys and the location. In a republic base a small space worm escaped and was last seen in a old city. Now it is up to the 80th legion to find it. I hope you all like it.

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The worms head.


A clone holding on for his life, and commander shade comming to the rescue.


A clone behind cover with a motor.


A crashed hover bike.


Two veiws of the worm and the broken road.




C@C are welcome.


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Post by Jens on Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:26 pm

I don't really see the MOC in it....It looks like what you take pictures on with a little lime here and there.
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Post by Knight on Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:29 pm

Jens wrote:I don't really see the MOC in it....It looks like what you take pictures on with a little lime here and there.

The worm, and the turret are both mocs. The are also layered plates to look like rocks on each end as well
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Post by Jens on Sat Dec 05, 2009 7:34 pm

Yea well to me, it's just some plates, it would have looked better if you took those 2 big ones in the back away and then worked on the ground, because right now I think you should have just posted some good pictures of the worm and turret as a tablescrap instead of a whole topic for them.
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Post by Knight on Sat Dec 05, 2009 9:44 pm

Jens wrote:Yea well to me, it's just some plates, it would have looked better if you took those 2 big ones in the back away and then worked on the ground, because right now I think you should have just posted some good pictures of the worm and turret as a tablescrap instead of a whole topic for them.

You're right I should have done that, anyways I will work on this.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:50 am

I'm sorry, but this doesn't really look like anything to me. It looks like you just took a few pieces and put them randomly on a baseplate. Wink
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Post by Knight on Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:18 am

Update redid the whole thing. This took about two hours this time. C@C are welcome.
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Post by Brandon9 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:53 am

Love the snot road, love the worm and how it's popping up, love your sig-fig's pose, love this MOC! Smile Fordo Yo!
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Post by Knight on Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:03 am

Brandon9 wrote:Love the snot road, love the worm and how it's popping up, love your sig-fig's pose, love this MOC! Smile Fordo Yo!

Thanks cause the first version was just bad.
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Post by Alpha on Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:05 am

Get a better backdrop.

Until then, I refuse to comment. Razz

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Post by Jens on Sun Dec 06, 2009 7:16 am

Get some paper....or a towel, something else than your floor.


And learn to hold the camera still.
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Post by Axel on Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:39 am

Jens wrote:Get some paper....or a towel, something else than your floor.


And learn to hold the camera still.

Agree with getting a better backdrop, but the camera work isn't that bad. When I started MOCing, most of my shots were semi-blurry as well.
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Post by Jens on Sun Dec 06, 2009 12:03 pm

Axel wrote:
Jens wrote:Get some paper....or a towel, something else than your floor.


And learn to hold the camera still.

Agree with getting a better backdrop, but the camera work isn't that bad. When I started MOCing, most of my shots were semi-blurry as well.

Well when you started was a while ago, 501st has so many great guides on the 'net and some very skilled photographers here. Wink
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Post by 80-0 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:13 pm

@ Jens' latest post: And obviously he hasn't thought to look up any of them yet, or his photos wouldn't be blurry. Hmm?

@ 501st: Very cool work! Can you PM me the first edition? I just want to see what everyone was fussing about... Razz

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Post by Jens on Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:25 pm

Well then I'll give him a little one now;


1. If you have a tripod, use it
2. Flash is not to be used, unless you aim it at a lamp or a reflector
3. Backdrops, use them, if you don't have enough for a big item, start small and learn the camera


That is all you really need to know right now.
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Post by PhiMa on Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:09 pm

Jens wrote:Well then I'll give him a little one now;


1. If you have a tripod, use it
2. Flash is not to be used, unless you aim it at a lamp or a reflector
3. Backdrops, use them, if you don't have enough for a big item, start small and learn the camera


That is all you really need to know right now.

Or just read THIS

Had its own topic once...but not special enough for that Mad
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Post by mhankewycz on Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:20 pm

Its looks alot better than the old one. The snot on the platform is nice.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:23 pm

This is much better than the previous one! Smile
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Post by Knight on Sun Dec 06, 2009 4:56 pm

Thanks everyone. I also will work on taking pics.
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:25 pm

This is totally awesome. The elevated road is great, and the worm construction is also superior!!

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Post by Knight on Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:19 am

Thanks CC007. I'm glad you like it.
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Post by astoriabluelegos on Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:36 am

WOW! I love it, that's all I can say, GREAT WORK! Shocked Blue Arc
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Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:34 am

Lovin' that road right there.
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Post by Gerrard on Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:30 pm

Yeah, nice work with this. Much better than the first. Wink
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Post by Rook on Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:12 pm

Ooo. Pretty green. Photoshop out the background and you've got something nice there. Wink

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