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Post by silvershadows1997 Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:41 am

This is my frist moc as a giuld member. Smile This fighter/bomer for my legion that replased both Y-wing and V-19 Torrent.
This star fighter was able to go hyperspeed. It often came out of hyperspeed right into the battle without being noticed.
They got there nick name from this tactic the falcons.

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I used the Hyena Droid Bomber's idea to incerss play abilaty.
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Post by Man on fire Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:55 am

Love it, just love it. It is (Like you said) a mix of the Y-wing and the V-19 torrent. Nice job! Smile
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Post by legorevolution Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:58 am

I like the concept and the ovarall shape, but it doesn't look quite finished. There are too many long studded pieces that are lacking greebles, tiling, etc. I'd suggest tossing some of those on there just to add some more detail, as right now it just looks like a shell.
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Post by Rook Thu Jan 28, 2010 3:26 pm

Ok if you're not going to use a spell checker that Guildship is gone. Edit your posts show use you have ALL the skills needed to be in the Guild. PS: Looks like the ship could use a bit more detailing too. Abrupt cut offs in the back make this look poorly built.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Thu Jan 28, 2010 11:37 pm

The wings look kind of stiff and it's missing some greebles. Wink
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Post by Gerrard Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:49 pm

Pretty good! As said above, greebles and some tiles are needed, but otherwise, welcome to the guild!
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