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This is just a small 20 minute moc. It is not my best work, but I like it so thought I would share it. In a small base a clone was in critical condition. When put into a experimental robotic suit eveything went wrong. Some unknow vial of plasma spilled on him turning him into a beast. The suit has 3 chainsaws, and a grenade launcher.
An overveiw.
A 80th legion clone running for help.
Poor clone who lost his lower limbs.
Last stand.
The bot/clone beast.
C@C are welcome.
An overveiw.
A 80th legion clone running for help.
Poor clone who lost his lower limbs.
Last stand.
The bot/clone beast.
C@C are welcome.
Last edited by 501st Commando on Tue Dec 08, 2009 12:13 am; edited 1 time in total
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Wow, that's impressive! Vile is spelled vial by the way.
I like the way you made the outside and the inside, as well as the suit. The only thing I'd possibly change is the color of the inside - I think it'd be a bit better in a bley/dark bley tone to give more contrast between the evil that was formed on the inside and the pure innocent outside... but that's getting a little artsy, so I'll stop there.
I like the way you made the outside and the inside, as well as the suit. The only thing I'd possibly change is the color of the inside - I think it'd be a bit better in a bley/dark bley tone to give more contrast between the evil that was formed on the inside and the pure innocent outside... but that's getting a little artsy, so I'll stop there.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
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Greebling doesn't make everything better. I think the floor is fine without it... it's just a laboratory, not like, say, a sewer where there'd be grates and pipes and whatnot everywhere. THAT is when you greeble a floor, in my opinion.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
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Thanks guys, but as 80-0 said why greeble a lab floor, people need to walk on them, not fall into pits or anything in that matter.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Thanks DY. I should add more blood, but i'm sorting all my lego at the moment, so I used what was at hand.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Wow, I'm loving this one, for pretty muc exactly the same reasons 80-0 already said.
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
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Only nitpick....the plants give no meaning what so ever....if you make something for them to stand in so it looks like it requires gardening then it would look good, but plants don't grow out of gray floors, or you could make the outside another colour (tan, brown etc).
Just my 2 cents.
Just my 2 cents.
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Much better! Glad to see you're using some detail in your MOCs. They don't have to be big, but detail is everything.
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Thanks guys, but I'm not going to change anything because it is scrapped. Anyways I'm glad most of you like it.
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