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Post by wrecks Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:37 am

I desided to redo my old "mustafar base" as I like building the lava and the certain type of castle like building, but didn't quite nail it the first time I tried.

The 112th were deployed for a invasion of the CIS headquarters on Mustafar. They were dropped as close as possible to the main building, but had to fight there way across the narrow walkways high above the molten hot lava. After an intense battle the reached the Com. room, but not fast enough to capture the Sepratist leaders. The mission was a failure, and after jedi commander Aarcolytes requested the special Lava troopers that are now part wide variety of 112th troop classes.

And sorry for the dark pictures, but right now with my camera I have to choose between dark or yellow.

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Post by Clonecommando007 Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:39 am

That is just plain awesome; good coloring combined with excellent MOC presentation and format, good terrain. Nice work!
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Post by Troopa Daisy Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:41 am

It's okay, better than the previous one, but it's not the best think that you've made so far. I quite like the exterior of the buildings, and the control room looks pretty good. However, I think that the walls would look better if they were greebled a bit as it is Mustafar. Wink Smile
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Post by Hazard with a Glove Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:44 am

Very nice all around, I really like the rocks, all the action, and the detail in side. Smile
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Post by Commander Lukas Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:08 am

This is a wonderfuly made outpost. The sharpshooter and the clone falling from the catwalk are nice touches.
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Post by Green Tee Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:36 am

I really don't think this is one of your better MOCs, Wrecks. Maybe it's the camera, but IMO the first one was better.
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Post by Darth Yoda Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:45 am

The lava sucks, the rest is great.
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Post by wrecks Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:47 am

I still havn't found any really good ways to make lava, I don't think this one is too bad but I agree it could be btter. Any suggestions?
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Post by Darth Yoda Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:49 am

wrecks wrote:I still havn't found any really good ways to make lava, I don't think this one is too bad but I agree it could be btter. Any suggestions?

Look through my stream. Wink

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Post by 80-0 Tue Dec 15, 2009 1:54 am

The interior is great, the figures are well-positioned, everything just looks nice. The lava looks like lava for what it's worth... it didn't stand out too terribly much to me.
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Post by Caboose Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:45 am

Trans red pieces are good for the lava. I would use parts from the duel on mustafar set if you have it. I really like the base though. Poor clone falling off the side. Sad
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Post by Gerrard Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:02 am

Excellent. The lava is simple, yet very real and effective. Nice work, definitely an improvement!
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Post by flare Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:13 am

Laughing, I see you did my hologram idea in there! Wow this thing looks
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Post by wrecks Tue Dec 15, 2009 3:21 am

flare wrote:Laughing, I see you did my hologram idea in there! Wow this thing looks

I thought it looked familier. I'll put credit in there, I wasn't sure who came up with it.
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Post by CloneCommandoXion Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:35 am

I like what you were going for, with the lava. I would have added another colour in there like...Yellow? Or something. The building is quite nice too. The mountains are okay but would be better if they were taller. I like the bridge though, and the clones attempting to cross it. Razz
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Post by Hazard with a Glove Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:39 am

Put tiles for the lava and plain plates for the rock, that way it has some texture to it.
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Post by DarthPineapple Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:17 am

Either build sideways for the lava or use tiles. Plus use the colors red and ornage (and possibly yellow), black doesn't look like flowing lava. Other than that, it's awesome.
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Post by PhiMa Tue Dec 15, 2009 12:06 pm

Do some snot work for the Lava, using red yellow and orange plates...I'm liking everything else, especially the rocky surfaces.

But could you take some brighter pictures? It all seems very dark :/
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Post by wrecks Tue Dec 15, 2009 11:57 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Either build sideways for the lava or use tiles. Plus use the colors red and ornage (and possibly yellow), black doesn't look like flowing lava. Other than that, it's awesome.
On the movie there's tonnes of black/dark brown stuff floating in the lava.

PhiMa wrote:But could you take some brighter pictures? It all seems very dark :/
If I take any of the pictures inside they turn out really yellow because of the bad lighting in my house and my camera. I usually take my pictures outside and in the shade where it has pretty good lighting, but now that it's winter the sun barely comes out.
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Post by Rogue Tue Dec 15, 2009 11:59 pm

Wow, that's some very nice detailing and design might I just say!
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Post by captain brick Fri Dec 18, 2009 9:41 am

The whole MOC is great, I especially like the bit where the clones are advancing. Smile
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