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Post by Knight on Fri Dec 18, 2009 11:54 pm

I thought of some new ideas for some mocs. They will be called the ''you first'' mocs. These are all going to be 8x8 vigs. In this moc two 80th legion troops found a data chip that needs to be taken to their base. Along the way one of them dropped it in lava. This is on mustafar, and the next will be either on hoth, or kashyyyk.

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The clone reaching for the data chip.


The vig.


C@C are welcome.
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Post by wrecks on Fri Dec 18, 2009 11:59 pm

The lava looks pretty good, but maybe try blending the colours a little better, they seem a bit jumbled. The walkway isn't as great, I'm not liking the hand rails. The minifig positioning looks a tad awkward...
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Fri Dec 18, 2009 11:59 pm

This is just way too simple. More stuff should be added on the sides or something. Wink
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Post by Knight on Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:04 am

wrecks wrote:The lava looks pretty good, but maybe try blending the colours a little better, they seem a bit jumbled. The walkway isn't as great, I'm not liking the hand rails. The minifig positioning looks a tad awkward...

Thanks wrecks. I tried getting the lava so it wasn't just a line of yellow, ect. But I will try to make the lava less jumbled though. Also should I just redo the whole walkway, or just fix the rails?
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Post by Cobra on Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:19 am

I totaly agree with Troopa Daisy. This is way to small. You need to add a big platform, and maybe make a big building. It's just kinda boring with this tiny set. (If you just don't have enough lego's to do what I'm recemending, I understand.) Smile He droped it in lava! What a clumsy clone!
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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:52 am

No offense, but do you know what MOC stands for? It's just a little annoying with you saying set so much.
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Post by Cobra on Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:59 am

Hazard with a Glove wrote:No offense, but do you know what MOC stands for? It's just a little annoying with you saying set so much.
Actually no, I don't know what it stands for. And don't really care. I think it's a set and I don't see any problem with calling it that. But if you don't like it I will Call it a MOC. So there.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:01 am

The word MOC stands for My Own Creations. Wink
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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:03 am

I don't mean to be rude, it's just that a set would be something made by TLC and a MOC by a civilian.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:05 am

Oh come on, chill, he's a new member, you can't expect him to know everything right away. Wink
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Post by Hazard with a Glove on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:06 am

I know, I know. And actually Cobra you seem like a really good member.
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Post by Cobra on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:21 am

Hazard with a Glove wrote:I know, I know. And actually Cobra you seem like a really good member.

Thank you, and sorry for the sarcasim. And thanks Troopa Daisy for helping me feel welcome. Smile
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Post by Cpt Rex on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:39 am

No offence, but it looks like the clone behind him is going to butt-hump him. Good besides that.
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Post by Axel on Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:52 am

Cpt Rex wrote:No offence, but it looks like the clone behind him is going to butt-hump him. Good besides that.

A tad awkward indeed...

I've found that working on a plate, as opposed to SNOT, for lava is a lot easier and has better results. You might want to give that a shot next time.
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