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You first part II

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You first part II

Post by Knight on Sat Dec 19, 2009 10:18 pm

Here is part two of the ''you first mocs''. This one is on kashyyyk. Two clones are trying to find wookies to make an alliance with before the CIS, but the wookies don't want to listen, so they attack. This was my first time making a tree, and I think it came out well, so I hope you all like it.

Here is version two.


I fixed the floating water.

C@C are welcome.


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Re: You first part II

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:00 pm

I'm sorry, but the tree looks more like part of a mountain than a tree. Everything else is okay though. Wink
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Re: You first part II

Post by MilitaMoose on Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:06 pm

Why isn't that water spreading through the grass?
It's a decent MOC, good for an 8x8.
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Re: You first part II

Post by Knight on Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:26 pm

MilitaMoose wrote:Why isn't that water spreading through the grass?
It's a decent MOC, good for an 8x8.

It is part of a river, but I get what you mean. It looks likes it should spread, but it doesn't.
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Post by wrecks on Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:43 pm

501st Commando wrote:It is part of a river, but I get what you mean. It looks likes it should spread, but it doesn't.

Water doesn't sit on top of the ground, take a few plates off your base and replace them with your transparent ones so that your river is level with the ground. The tree trunk is way to thick, you either need to make the tree taller or narrow down the trunk. I do like the swinging Wookiee, though.
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Re: You first part II

Post by Knight on Sat Dec 19, 2009 11:51 pm

wrecks wrote:
501st Commando wrote:It is part of a river, but I get what you mean. It looks likes it should spread, but it doesn't.

Water doesn't sit on top of the ground, take a few plates off your base and replace them with your transparent ones so that your river is level with the ground. The tree trunk is way to thick, you either need to make the tree taller or narrow down the trunk. I do like the swinging Wookiee, though.

On kashyyyk the tree trunks are thick though, and I will see if I can make it taller. I will fix the river for sure.
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Re: You first part II

Post by Cpt Rex on Sun Dec 20, 2009 1:16 am

Good moc, but didn't Wookiees and the Republic form an alliance?
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Post by Knight on Sun Dec 20, 2009 1:18 am

Cpt Rex wrote:Good moc, but didn't Wookiees and the Republic form an alliance?

If you read the story it said they are trying to make an alliance.
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Re: You first part II

Post by Knight on Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:19 am

Update. I fixed the water.
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Re: You first part II

Post by Commander Cobra on Mon Dec 21, 2009 12:31 am

Nice Kashyyyk vig love the attacking wookie
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Re: You first part II

Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:04 am

Shouldn't the water be in trans-blue than clear though? Wink
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Re: You first part II

Post by Alpha on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:09 am

You do realize that water is transparent, right?

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Re: You first part II

Post by Knight on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:11 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:Shouldn't the water be in trans-blue than clear though? Wink

Fail. Wow this thing looks'oh: Water can be clear. It is not a swimming pool, it is a clear river.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:16 am

Okay sure. But than why do the oceans look blue? Unless the sun is reflecting the image from the sky...
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Re: You first part II

Post by Knight on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:19 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:Okay sure. But than why do the oceans look blue? Unless the sun is reflecting the image from the sky...

It is not the ocean though. It is a river. Most clean rivers are clear
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Re: You first part II

Post by Alpha on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:45 am

Troopa Daisy wrote:Okay sure. But than why do the oceans look blue? Unless the sun is reflecting the image from the sky...

I'm sorry... but have you ever learned this in school?

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Re: You first part II

Post by Troopa Daisy on Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:51 am

No I haven't. Unfortunately, we don't choose what we learn in school and learn about something stupid. So I take a good guess. Wink
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Re: You first part II

Post by Cobra on Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:35 am

Water is clear. The reason ocean water is blue is becuase of the reflection of the sky. Good MOC though. I think the tree is good.
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