You first part II

Here is part two of the ''you first mocs''. This one is on kashyyyk. Two clones are trying to find wookies to make an alliance with before the CIS, but the wookies don't want to listen, so they attack. This was my first time making a tree, and I think it came out well, so I hope you all like it.

Here is version two.


I fixed the floating water.

C@C are welcome.

I'm sorry, but the tree looks more like part of a mountain than a tree. Everything else is okay though.

Why isn't that water spreading through the grass?
It's a decent MOC, good for an 8x8.

MilitaMoose wrote:Why isn't that water spreading through the grass?
It's a decent MOC, good for an 8x8.

It is part of a river, but I get what you mean. It looks likes it should spread, but it doesn't.

501st Commando wrote:It is part of a river, but I get what you mean. It looks likes it should spread, but it doesn't.

Water doesn't sit on top of the ground, take a few plates off your base and replace them with your transparent ones so that your river is level with the ground. The tree trunk is way to thick, you either need to make the tree taller or narrow down the trunk. I do like the swinging Wookiee, though.

wrecks wrote:

501st Commando wrote:It is part of a river, but I get what you mean. It looks likes it should spread, but it doesn't.

Water doesn't sit on top of the ground, take a few plates off your base and replace them with your transparent ones so that your river is level with the ground. The tree trunk is way to thick, you either need to make the tree taller or narrow down the trunk. I do like the swinging Wookiee, though.

On kashyyyk the tree trunks are thick though, and I will see if I can make it taller. I will fix the river for sure.

Good moc, but didn't Wookiees and the Republic form an alliance?

Cpt Rex wrote:Good moc, but didn't Wookiees and the Republic form an alliance?

If you read the story it said they are trying to make an alliance.

Update. I fixed the water.

Nice Kashyyyk vig love the attacking wookie

Shouldn't the water be in trans-blue than clear though?

You do realize that water is transparent, right?

Troopa Daisy wrote:Shouldn't the water be in trans-blue than clear though?

Fail. 'oh: Water can be clear. It is not a swimming pool, it is a clear river.

Okay sure. But than why do the oceans look blue? Unless the sun is reflecting the image from the sky...

Troopa Daisy wrote:Okay sure. But than why do the oceans look blue? Unless the sun is reflecting the image from the sky...

It is not the ocean though. It is a river. Most clean rivers are clear

Troopa Daisy wrote:Okay sure. But than why do the oceans look blue? Unless the sun is reflecting the image from the sky...

I'm sorry... but have you ever learned this in school?

No I haven't. Unfortunately, we don't choose what we learn in school and learn about something stupid. So I take a good guess.

Water is clear. The reason ocean water is blue is becuase of the reflection of the sky. Good MOC though. I think the tree is good.