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Post by flare Sat Dec 26, 2009 8:52 pm

A small squad of marines led by Spartan-O07 (James - EVA class) landed on a unknown planet that has no record in the UNSC data files. Fighting for their lives against the strange natives.

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Squad of marines and James:
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Reloading Marine:
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Post by Jens Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:08 pm

darn that spartan look like mine... Razz

Gravity Hammer, Eva Helmet and dark bley/black colour combo.



Well anyways...the MOC is not that special actually, it would be nice if Castle...but it's too bland as a Halo MOC.
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Post by flare Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:13 pm

Jens wrote:darn that spartan look like mine... Razz

Gravity Hammer, Eva Helmet and dark bley/black colour combo.



Well anyways...the MOC is not that special actually, it would be nice if Castle...but it's too bland as a Halo MOC.
What should I add/remove in this Moc In your opinion? Smile
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Post by Gerrard Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:20 pm

Maybe make it a bit bigger and add more things to the floor. It looks a bit too plain on the floor with just tiles. Wink
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Post by flare Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:30 pm

Gerrard wrote:Maybe make it a bit bigger and add more things to the floor. It looks a bit too plain on the floor with just tiles. Wink
Entry has to be on a 16x32 base plate. Can't be bigger or smaller.

Also, I think more things on the floor would make it more cluttered. I was going to add a 3rd crate when I spent my Christmas money on a set that had a dark-bley one. But I decided to screw it.
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Post by PhiMa Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:43 pm

Greeble it, give the floor craters, and ecksploshuns, this is a battle going on.
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Post by Jens Sun Dec 27, 2009 12:21 am

flare wrote:
Jens wrote:darn that spartan look like mine... Razz

Gravity Hammer, Eva Helmet and dark bley/black colour combo.



Well anyways...the MOC is not that special actually, it would be nice if Castle...but it's too bland as a Halo MOC.
What should I add/remove in this Moc In your opinion? Smile


I think it needs some trans clear of any colour some where....and it doesn't really look like a battle, lazors? I don't see them.

Food for thoughts.
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Post by flare Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:10 am

PhiMa wrote:Greeble it, give the floor craters, and ecksploshuns, this is a battle going on.
Ok, Since when do bullets, swords, ray guns, and a hammer that smashes everything around make big-arse craters? True, but this is a small squad, not a company filled with Hornets, Scorpions, Warthogs, Mongooses, etc. IT's a small squad scouting *should include that to the back-story*

@Jens, I do agree, but I don't want to leave a trans red/blue light saber blade in the middle of a battle. I prefer it be canceled a bit like Revo did with his Yavin 4 Moc a while back.

@Gerrad, When was the last time you posted a 32x32 Moc, detailed. Or any Moc for instance? I haven't seem you build one since you got into the guild. So no room to talk much. You build someone that I love, and then you can talk like that on anyone’s Moc.
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Post by captain brick Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:25 am

I remember the Yavin 4 Moc, great stuff, great stuff......... Anyway, back on topic, I think this is fine, though maybe some more aliens.
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Post by PhiMa Sun Dec 27, 2009 12:42 pm

flare wrote:

@Gerrad, When was the last time you posted a 32x32 Moc, detailed. Or any Moc for instance? I haven't seem you build one since you got into the guild. So no room to talk much. You build someone that I love, and then you can talk like that on anyone’s Moc.

Looks like someone can't handle constructive criticism...
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Post by Comrade Faie Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:39 pm

flare wrote:
PhiMa wrote:Greeble it, give the floor craters, and ecksploshuns, this is a battle going on.
Ok, Since when do bullets, swords, ray guns, and a hammer that smashes everything around make big-arse craters? True, but this is a small squad, not a company filled with Hornets, Scorpions, Warthogs, Mongooses, etc. IT's a small squad scouting *should include that to the back-story*

@Jens, I do agree, but I don't want to leave a trans red/blue light saber blade in the middle of a battle. I prefer it be canceled a bit like Revo did with his Yavin 4 Moc a while back.

@Gerrad, When was the last time you posted a 32x32 Moc, detailed. Or any Moc for instance? I haven't seem you build one since you got into the guild. So no room to talk much. You build someone that I love, and then you can talk like that on anyone’s Moc.

Alright flare, you can't talk either. You didn't start to build until at least 3 weeks ago for a whole year and some more months from when you joined here all you did was buy, sell, and trade CAC. I saw really old application into the 565th attack corps back in '08, and it was ship, DP will attest to that. So you can't really talk until you build more...

Also that Gravity Hammer makes a pretty big boom when in hits the floor, I'd suggest having a crater, as well as bullet holes.
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Post by Heady Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:57 pm

flare wrote:@Gerrad, When was the last time you posted a 32x32 Moc, detailed. Or any Moc for instance? I haven't seem you build one since you got into the guild. So no room to talk much. You build someone that I love, and then you can talk like that on anyone’s Moc.
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Post by Ham701 Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:39 pm

Besides the obvious of what everyone else has said, a Spartan would not have a Gravity Hammer. The weapon is only used by Brute Chieftains, and from your description, these Marines are far from the Covenant, let alone the Brutes.
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Post by Jens Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:42 pm

Aye?


Flare since when do movie critiqs have to make a movie that the instructor likes?
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Post by Troopa Daisy Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:54 pm

It looks pretty good, but it's missing some greebles on the floor. Wink
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Post by Justin Pyne Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:18 pm

The wall is very well detailed, I'll admit to that. But as everyone else is saying, the floor seems to be missing something. This is a war zone, remember? There should be a crater here or there. Wink
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Post by flare Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:45 pm

Heady wrote:
flare wrote:@Gerrad, When was the last time you posted a 32x32 Moc, detailed. Or any Moc for instance? I haven't seem you build one since you got into the guild. So no room to talk much. You build someone that I love, and then you can talk like that on anyone’s Moc.
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I spelled checked it. I don't see the 32x32 Moc, that I like. And half of those are in the GMA and alot of them are WIPS never finished.

@Faie, I've been busy allot. I've made 3 Mocs off the top of my head. Several figure post. Also play Halo 3 one more time with a GH, it does make a big boom, possible I could do one with that.

@Jens, I just want your opinion what the critics would like, getting a general idea on what I can improve on my building skills. Wink

@Daisy, as said before it would look a little bit cluttered.

@Ham, It just a concept, I know about brutes. And it's just made-up.

It's not a huge war, it's a small skirmish.
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Post by -Aki- Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:53 pm

It's pretty cool. Just doesn't scream war to me. I think you should have some damage (Craters, scorches, ect) from prevoius battles in it.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:24 pm

flare wrote:

@Daisy, as said before it would look a little bit cluttered.


Shouldn't there be a few bullet holes or some sort of damage to the wall though? It is a battle. Wink
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Post by Alpha Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:41 pm

It's nice, but it's a battle - so make it look like one. Wink
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Post by Hazard with a Glove Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:13 am

Like eveyone else, I think it's good but needs more battle detail.
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Post by Darman Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:00 am

Every battle has a beginning everyone's battle scene isn't necessarily at the end or at the middle. Well anyway the greebeling on the wall is nice but the floors could use some more detail.
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Post by KinGanon Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:16 am

Well Flare I ,for one, like your scene. The bridge is well designed(engine pieces for detail is great), the Spartan(James Bond reference?) and Marines have a perfect balance of purist and custom elements. The bridge isn't too cluttered and the inclusion of something other than the Covenant was original. All in all great job.
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Post by flare Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:02 pm

Darman-C19 wrote:Every battle has a beginning everyone's battle scene isn't necessarily at the end or at the middle. Well anyway the greebeling on the wall is nice but the floors could use some more detail.
Shocked THANK YOU! SOMEONE sees this is a beginning of a small battle.

@KG, Thank you so much, yes, I did do James Bond references because I was not to creative about it. There is not much room for a crater or other big details on the bridge because, there is only 11 studs across that can be used for the craters and etc. for 32 studs long. (32x11 is left out of the 32x16 moc). You have made my day!
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Post by Knight Mon Dec 28, 2009 5:08 pm

I like it just the way it is. Also why does everyone say add greebles. Greebles don't make everything better. Anyways it is a nice moc with some nice details about.
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