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Mech Wars: Introductory vig...

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Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:36 am

Just before I say whats going on, the mech design for this one is not entirely mine. It's base is Chewk's so credit to him for that.
(main character speaking below)
The world has fallen apart after on government after another became obsessed with the new powers of technology. Only a few of us still stand fighting. I travel alone, looking for others that will support my cause. I have passed through city to city and still I find no one at all. Maybe here that will change...

Main Pic:

A pic of the mech. Like I said, it's a modded design of Chewk's mech that I really liked.

I don't know why but I like this shot.

I hope you like it!
C&C welcome!


Last edited by CloneCommandoXion on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:23 pm; edited 3 times in total
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Post by Halen on Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:53 am

Pretty cool. Street seems a little skinny but its a excellent showcase for the mech.

Original design is from: Chewk's photostream Smile
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Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sat Feb 27, 2010 2:56 am

To be honest... Except for the nice decals on his...I like my version better. Laughing
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Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:25 am

I think I like yours better too. Open mechs are better methinks.

Very nice vig! Like Halen said, the road could be wider, but that's just a minor nitpick. Good work! Smile
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Post by Knight on Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:29 am

I really like this one CCX! The only thing that I would change is the round trans clear pieces in the window to square 1xN plates. Other than that it looks great! Smile
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Post by bl*c on Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:50 am

Awesome, I think it's great Smile. I agree with Knight on the window thing.

Overall nice job. Wink
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Post by eclipsegrafx on Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:14 am

Great job! I like it but I have to agree on the street width only because you have that tire and garbage can which throws off the who size ratio.

I thought the width was meant to be narrow because he (the mech) was meant to be so big. If that is the case get a smaller tie and garbage can.

I love the broken glass window.
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 27, 2010 9:58 am

You need to give credit to Chewk. 'Someone else' is not his name.
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Post by PhiMa on Sat Feb 27, 2010 10:37 am

CloneCommandoXion wrote:Just before I say whats going on, the mech design for this one is not entirely mine but I forgot who made it.
Commander Halen wrote:
Original design is from: Chewk's photostream Smile
DarthPineapple wrote:You need to give credit to Chewk. 'Someone else' is not his name.

Read everything first, it helps. Wink
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 27, 2010 12:30 pm

I read it, but he didn't edit his post after he found out who made the original design.
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Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Feb 27, 2010 4:11 pm

This is very nice, I like the street, the broken window, and the mech! Smile
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Re: Mech Wars: Introductory vig...

Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:21 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:I read it, but he didn't edit his post after he found out who made the original design.

All fixed for ya DP. I would have given credit to him If I knew his name then. Wink Anyways now I fixed it, any comments on the moc now?
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Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:27 pm

Yea. I like all the SNOT used. As the building and stuff is damaged or burning, how about a broken street?
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Post by CloneCommandoXion on Sat Feb 27, 2010 7:57 pm

Ok I might try that. My next few mocs are only gonna be mech's though. Wink Then when the story gets to a good point I'll build a big battle. Smile
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Re: Mech Wars: Introductory vig...

Post by Guest on Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:27 pm

This one looks really good! I think you should continue the story line.

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Re: Mech Wars: Introductory vig...

Post by jdeekin on Thu Mar 25, 2010 1:59 am

Sorry didn't mean to bump this.
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