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"E" is for empire rule

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Post by Knight Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:36 pm

"ABC" is back! Next up is letter "E".

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Without the figs.
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Post by Custom 333 Mon Mar 01, 2010 5:46 pm

It's not much, the concept is good, what would really make it cool would be some shocked onlookers. Smile
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Post by Guest Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:02 pm

I LOVE Love the doorway idea, great job! I think it is kind of plain though besides that.
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Post by Fithboy Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:04 pm

I agree with Custom King, but there should be two more dark red patches on the floor, methinks.
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Post by eclipsegrafx Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:12 pm

I have to say... I like the concept but it's kind of plain. I think that would help is more greebles on the wall (I like the floor as is. Smile ) maybe verticle greebles to give it some height illusion.

Its a nice solid piece but it is missing that knight touch... that extra umph. Smile
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Post by Knight Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:25 pm

Thanks for the comments everyone. I didn't want to over greeble it because it's on a city street, but I will still work on it a bit. Smile
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Post by Guest Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:28 pm

Maybe you could make it bigger and have more people in it. Or have it like the Empire is smashing a rebellion.
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Post by bl*c Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:43 pm

Nice little scene, I like the tiling and the idea. Smile
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Post by Troopa Daisy Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:33 pm

A good scene, but it'll look better if you can enlarge it a bit. Wink
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Post by eclipsegrafx Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:35 pm

I don't know if enlarging it would make it better... it has plenty of space at the moment... if you enlarge it then add more details or maybe just make that wall into 2 floors with maybe 2 windows... or something to show its outside.
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Post by Cobra Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:56 pm

eclipsegrafx wrote: it has plenty of space at the moment....
That's the thing, so much space but nothing there. It is a prety good MOC, just somthing is missing. Maybe a light post or two. Wink
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Post by aquabug1998 Fri Mar 19, 2010 12:47 pm

Custom King wrote:It's not much, the concept is good, what would really make it cool would be some shocked onlookers. Smile

I looove the door, it's great, and I think the overall concept is good as well, but I agree, it could use more people.
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Post by legorevolution Fri Mar 19, 2010 10:59 pm

Other than the binocular greebles sticking into the doorway, I really like it. Those greebles look nice and simple on the wall like that, but I think you should've done a 1 stud offset so the doorway problem never existed. Wink
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Post by Knight Sat Mar 20, 2010 1:56 am

legorevolution wrote:Other than the binocular greebles sticking into the doorway, I really like it. Those greebles look nice and simple on the wall like that, but I think you should've done a 1 stud offset so the doorway problem never existed. Wink

I'll have to try that next time! The binoculars are sensors to check if anyone stole from the building. The MOC has been scrapped for some time now but comments are always welcome.

@-Thanks for the comments everyone! Smile
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