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MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by bl*c on Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:26 pm

Well heres a miniature Malevolence cruiser I made. I'm almost done, just waiting on a couple of dark blue slopes I'm gonna order.
Tell me what you think: improvements, comments, or criticism. I hope you enjoy it.




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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Guest on Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:29 pm

I can't really think of anything to add, maybe a few mini ships.

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Post by Persian Prince on Sat Apr 03, 2010 8:29 pm

Shocked That thing is awesome dude!
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Troopa Daisy on Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:19 pm

I think it could use some cannons in the front bottom and some greebles on the side near the back. Wink
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by KinGanon on Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:54 pm

I think the main shape is pretty accurate, just it lacks detail. Greebles along the side of the ship(especially the back since it seems very bland), maybe some light blue round 1x2 studs on the bridge to add detail there? It's a good start, but it lacks detail is all.
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by bl*c on Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:21 pm

KinGanon wrote:I think the main shape is pretty accurate, just it lacks detail. Greebles along the side of the ship(especially the back since it seems very bland), maybe some light blue round 1x2 studs on the bridge to add detail there? It's a good start, but it lacks detail is all.
Can you provide a link or picture, because I'm not sure what piece you're talking about. If you mean This, I don't know how that's going to work.


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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by 1 Million Watts of Power on Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:36 pm

bl*c wrote:
KinGanon wrote:I think the main shape is pretty accurate, just it lacks detail. Greebles along the side of the ship(especially the back since it seems very bland), maybe some light blue round 1x2 studs on the bridge to add detail there? It's a good start, but it lacks detail is all.
Can you provide a link or picture, because I'm not sure what piece you're talking about. If you mean This, I don't know how that's going to work.
I think that he means the ones that you used to make the ion cannon with. As in, the transparent ones.
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Rook on Sat Apr 03, 2010 10:45 pm

Excellent ion weapon for that scale. Thumbs up

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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Darth Dan on Sun Apr 04, 2010 12:07 am

Pretty sweet man! I love the ion cannon. Smile
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Caboose on Sun Apr 04, 2010 12:15 am

Awesome, it looks like the real thing, in a smaller size. Nice proportion. Remove the gray tiles in the back and replace them with greebles to un-bland it.
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by KinGanon on Sun Apr 04, 2010 4:42 am

Yes I meant the ones on the ion cannon(1x2?!?! What was I thinking?) 1x1 is what I meant.
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by luke500 on Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:39 am

Great MINI Malevolence Smile.
But I think you should have the canons on top (I think they are canons)facing different ways.
And the back is to plain it needs more.......?
The bridge is way to plain.

And I her the word greebls a lot can some one please explain to me what you mean by that?
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Apr 04, 2010 7:47 am

What about changing the cannon so a trans-light blue 4x4 dish can be placed with the stud inwards (into the ship)?
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by droidbait on Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:49 pm

luke500 wrote:Great MINI Malevolence Smile.
But I think you should have the canons on top (I think they are canons)facing different ways.
And the back is to plain it needs more.......?
The bridge is way to plain.

And I her the word greebls a lot can some one please explain to me what you mean by that?

greebles are basically details that you put on with certain bricks.

On to the ship, great mini-scale Malevolence. I do agree with the others, it needs something on the bridge to make it look like a bridge.
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by MyOwnCreations on Sun Apr 04, 2010 5:14 pm

@-Droidbait and others... You do know this is a WIP... right?

Anyway lovin the ion cannon. Just make sure with the bridge that you add a level of green trans. Smile
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Post by droidbait on Sun Apr 04, 2010 8:17 pm

@-MyOwnCreations, I know it is just a WIP, all I am saying is that it needs something on the bridge when it is completed.
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Zepher on Mon Apr 05, 2010 3:17 am

Very well done. The only thing I could potentinally carp about is that it does not look symetric. Though I don't watch the show, so the fact that it SHOULD be symetric is simply an assumption. Good work!
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by MyOwnCreations on Mon Apr 05, 2010 1:33 pm

droidbait wrote:@-MyOwnCreations, I know it is just a WIP, all I am saying is that it needs something on the bridge when it is completed.

Ohh haha I though you said... "Add few greebles on bridge...done." Haha sorrymy bad
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by akane on Sat Apr 10, 2010 12:42 am

Hmmm... looks good overall but I think you should make the bridge bigger? Blue Arc Camo
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Re: MINI Malevolence WIP

Post by Alpha Beta on Sat Apr 10, 2010 3:09 am

Needs more variety of turrets, the binoculars are good, but it needs something else. Wink
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R.E Mini malovelence WIP

Post by The 58th Legion on Sat Apr 10, 2010 9:27 am

I like the ion cannon but as everyone else said i'd (we) would like to more on the bridge. I think the gun's on the ship looked very packed together, it doesn't remind me of the Malovelence but I can see where your coming from with it... What! Embarassed
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R.E MINI MALOVELENCE WIP

Post by Deltasquad7 on Mon Apr 12, 2010 7:05 pm

It's a nice little creation although I think it could use some stickers on the side
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